That was fun, I’m curious where it will lead.
And I found some typos as well as a bit of feedback.
Thingking → Thinking
I also recommend getting rid of the past tense “were”, and make it into something like…
You think for a second.
Women probably would want to do the towel differently.
It sounds as if you’re calling for more cold/hot, making it that it would be better the other way around.
you yells → you yell
you whispers → you whisper
Good luck with this project