I made my promo art to all of the specified sizes and wrote my game description and bullets. The 20 derivative subject lines are next. Ugh! Going blind fast!
Can someone please skim through this to see if I missed anything obvious or not so obvious. Does this work or sound too whatever for the sales copy I need to submit? I’m not a natural copy writer.
Impressions? Does it work for this market?
Confront your worst fears by joining our team of international misfits and try to survive the terrors of this deadly salvage mission, playing yourself as you descend two miles into the mystery, suspicion and mortal dangers waiting for you at the bottom of the doomed Tartarus Deep Core Exploration gold mine to find out what happened to the miners who never returned to the surface – and try to stay alive to escape from where no one has returned.
SALVAGE TEAM is a non-stop, 88,500 word interactive survival/horror novel by James Arnett, where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based – without graphics or sound effects – and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.
This adventure is a scary, funny, death defying, survival/horror that leverages the psychology of paranoia to compound the jeopardy with every desperate choice you make.
Download this limited play demo to step across the line into the unknown. If you really get into it, you can always buy it to find your fortune, be a hero or die trying because this is hard-boiled survival/horror.
If you think you can take that kind of pressure – join the Salvage Team now!
Play yourself as a male, female, gender-fluid,or non-binary, gay, straight, or asexual main character.
Select your own profession from among our team of international misfits.
Confront your worst fears in the subterranean world of the doomed, deep core gold mine.
Rise to the challenge of solving the mystery of the terror below and escape with your life.
Negotiate everything from your bonus pay to your own survival and live with your decisions.
Discover that important someone on the team who really needs you to survive.
Make a nemesis or make a love interest, or leave everyone to themselves because you may never know who you can really trust until the last moment.