Sixth entry
@Eiwynn congratulations for presenting
Through the Twisting Glass
Feedback wanted
Feedback Questions
1: Did the first chapter get you interested?
2: Were there any parts of the story that dragged… or that felt rushed?
3: Were there any parts that confused you?
4: What did you think of the characters?
5: Did the ending leave you satisfied?
6: What would you change about the story?
7: What did you like about the story?
Link to Through the Twisting Glass
As always send the feedback from the game to author, @Eiwynn via pm not here.