UPDATE - 28/03/17:
This is not a big update at all - I’ve rewritten a couple scenes, and added more to the game’s intro, mostly based on your feedback. Also, post 38 includes a few questions I’d appreciate if you answered in case you’ve played the demo; it’d really help me with my writing.
Thank you for the feedback so far, you’re all great.
FIRST POST - 18/03/17
Hey, everyone. A month ago I shared my idea for a high school detective game, and now my (short) demo is done:
You find out your friend Cecilia Richards is missing, and none of the adults seem to care; they’re just going about life like nothing’s happened. The only ones who do see what’s happening? The teenagers, which is why is up to you and your friends to figure out what is going on with Cecilia and all the grown-ups.
Please be brutally honest, and tell me what you thought of this demo so far. Also, I hope there aren’t too many grammar mistakes, but, since English is not my first language, it’s a strong possibility.
WARNING: there is some profanity, especially from the character Emilia. If you’re not comfortable with that, I wouldn’t recommend playing this!