Why’d you remove the bell as a talisman?
Because I had no idea what second magic I could use with that. (However this is all still very very early WIP, and it can all change)
However there will be the option to choose something with bells later.
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Ah. I was wondering if there was a story reason or if it was just a preference.
I love tiny bells!
Rn I just dont have any ideas, and we will see if I am going to keep this system at all.
Yeah. I carried one for years, so always chose that to have as my talisman. I probably should try the others (the snowflake and the rabbit’s foot) but have been sticking with the feather for now.
Maybe I will add a later choice of another trinket for the colleague that is looking for MC (like that they find it), but the choice of your trinket is actually setting your secondary magic!
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I don’t understand where we find the primary magic. I know with the feather that the secondary magic is turning into a bird, is the primary magic simply more of a general ability to use magic?
Its your job!
Oh? I thought that was setting personality! Hm. I don’t know what’s going to be more interesting to see how that gets applied.
So far the choices for setting personality are like zero.
LOL! And here I was, making sure I washed my dishes and chose a job that was in large part about keeping things organised!
I already love your MC!
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Honestly, probably none of that’s going to change, whatever the system of magic or personality determination you put in. My IF personas always have themselves more together than I actually do!
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Just to be clear, the MC isn’t an actual giant pigeon or something walking around this time? They sound human…but I’ve been tricked before! >:0
It sounds interesting so far – will the perspective be switching between the mundane world and the fantasy world? I thought it was interesting seeing the reaction to your disappearance but I’m apparently so responsible my first reaction wasn’t ooh magical realm but oh no did not call out for my magical disappearance now my co-workers will be grumpy at trying to cover my shift haha. One thing I feel is that we’re missing options to panic or be upset at essentially being kidnapped and forced to sign a contract (under duress?) This wizard sounds very suspicious. My stern nurse MC will have none of this anti-healing nonsense!
Put me down as officially a fan of your work!
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Some day I am going to write an actual game with animals as protagonists (imagine like Watership Down or Felidae!) and will try my best to make it seem as if they are all humans for as long as i can.
(also bold of you to assume an opera mc would be a pigean instead of a peacock)
Tbh I would be the same 
also work in medicine and tbh just not showing up would make me so anxious.
And yes there will be switches,and you will also be able to go back on some points!
I am planning to add a few more reactions but rn I want to get some world building done before I continue to write 
cause it changed a bit and I want to make sure it still fits nicely into the story!
I can feel my power growing with every new fan! (but seriously: thanks, it means a lot to me, knowing my silly ideas have fans)
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