From Ashes We Rise [FAWR / WIP] Upd. 30. Oct

Really? Huh.

Guess I’ll need to replay it.

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@Wraith
I found these spelling errors under “Make yourself scarce” and “feel lonely”.

The positipon

Position

ofBeing

Add a space between the two words.

Somehow, youthis

Remove ‘this’.

feels

Swap ‘feels’ with ‘feel’.

were just got thrown away

Remove ‘were’.

being replaced by a new model

Was replaced.

You know, for this forum being the most popular out there, the demo sure is short. O.o But color me interested. I definitely would play the finished game.

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Did you reveal yourself to Crow? It’s much longer if you don’t.

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Huh. Didn’t try that. Might just have to do that.

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i enjoyed revealing myself to crow excited to see how the story will go from there.

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I hope this thing aint dead

@Wraith is rather busy, with her job and all that.

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Like @Snowpanther said, my work keeps me very busy. Work starts at around 8am, need to take public transportation and stand up at 6am. Work is done at around 5pm and will only be home at around 6pm if i am lucky… then dinner and I might get an hour to write…
Dont expect any update soon honestly. :frowning:
I do my best to write what I can.

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Oh well im very sorry didnt mean anything bad its just the activity here is rather less than before

That happens when people do something like work. Not as if FAWR is making any money.

@Wraith I love this and appreciate you taking the time to write this. Jobs are necessary so do whatever you can when you want. Your last update was really good, so just keep it up.

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I can relate to this problem so much.

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Good luck, man. Jobs can be a killer. I left the workforce a year ago, and i don’t regret a second of it. The US really is a slave state, just with green bank notes as chains.

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Life huh? Similar to mine. Except I wake up at 5 so I can take a 3 hour bus journey there, then the 3 hour journey back. Getting home at 9pm.

Life is hell sometimes. Wish you luck.

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Well, thanks.

But please refrain from posting on WiP threads that are dormant for a loooong time. (A month, was it? Three weeks?) Threads can get locked that way.

Mourns her thread. “It was nice knowing you.“
Eyes the lock hammer fearfully.

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The limit is around 14 days.


Please do not post in WiPs that have not been active recently. If the author would like this reopened, PM me or one of the moderators and we’ll be happy to.