Something funny with a variable, I just ‘cut it out’
for now should work again.
Thanks for the tips, I am a wholly self taught writer so I’m bound to make some fundamental errors, AH yes the Silic intro being confusing, well Its probably because its a bunch of stacked choices and the text doesn’t flow well, I may have to divvy up some of the scenes rather than cramming them all together. I’ll have to play it through myself to streamline how it reads.
I am mildly intimidated by the fan turnout.
Welcome back!
I was a little disappointed that choosing the name “First” didn’t have any unique dialogue. 
AH yes, I did forget I did that in the other. don’t you worry I got you.
Okay I’m going to play the old demo again but what does naming our character first change
Well it seems the army of old freaks and squeaks is back mixed in with a few newbies to your story.
You have alerted the horde!
This is the question I was going to ask what exactly was this incident.
I was waiting for someone to wonder “Why don’t we just punch our way through the walls for our freedom?” The K3 Riftwater disaster is when the lab ‘at the bottom of the ocean’ got a hole in the wall
Yes there will be a stylist at some point, there is just no hairdressers in the lab right now. 
Is it too late to hide?
To be fair apparently we can’t swim so it would be a bad idea anyway. I’m guessing K3 was a freak like us that tried it and probably failed. I’m glad we will have a stylist soon.
well i mean we are patient troublemaking firsts…
we will of course line up in rows and sit waiting only messing with eachother.
maybe take a playful jab at vyde. or think loud thoughts all the time.
[PANCAKE ARE DELISH!]
Omg welcome back! I could actually cry tears of joy 
Freaks holds a special place in my heart, I’m happy to see and get to read it again!
So is the modesty trait system thing still gonna be in it? Don’t judge me!
Welcome back
I miss this
Oh my God this is actually my first choice of game story that was not finished I’m happy that it’s back!
You out here curing my depression. Welcome back
Wait why is the only mark hosted game? shouldn’t it also have WIP
Also Jesus Christ it’s really been since 2019 when the old version was last updated. During that span of time, I graduated College, FNAF turned 10 years old, and too much crap to list, that and the dumpster fire that was 2020.
Rambling Aside, I had almost given up hope of seeing this story again. Kinda refreshing to see a resurgence of a piece of interactive fiction for a change.
Side note, maybe put a notification on the old version’s topic to let more people know that this rewrite exists.
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/Leaves the room.
@Snoe welcome back 
i have vague memory of the demo from long ago and from that i can tell the differences at least the biggest ones in the new and i enjoyed looking forward to seeing what comes next.
