Freak: Falling Awake: Demo & Discussion(WIP)

I’m excited to see future content I remember the old WIP is was great I am looking forward to the new version :slightly_smiling_face:

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yo, no way, I loved Freak, this is sweet

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A surprise, to be sure, but a welcome one.

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The original was like that, it was fun.

Technically, it’s not a universe, anyone can make whatever SCP thing they want, it’s like Slenderman or most public domain creations.

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Welcome welcome back!!! So glad to see your still working and OK glad you returned this was one of the best wips I have rever read and if you get it fixed and published I will be there tk buy it

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Omg hyperventilating with excitement. My favorite Wip of all time. Do I wish it was longer because I’ve been re-reading this for years and we haven’t come close to catching up with the existing written word? Of course. Do I care? Not in the least. Just here in a corner giving praise and thanks to @Snoe for bringing it back, I’m so happy you picked this up again, it’s brilliant.

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Wait the wip is actually oh thank you sweet sweet baby Jesus

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so there was a another version (old one) out ? still possible this to read or only this one

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here you go

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Looks like freaks are back on the menu! Very excited to see this one back.

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Hey, congratulations on the new WIP! I remember seeing the old version back when I was first poking around with ChoiceScript so it’s great to see you again!

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Oh my goodness It’s back! Freak is BACK!!! feels like something out of a dream! A great one!

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great to see you back i loved the original freak wip can’t wait to see this new one

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We’re so fucking back. YEAH!

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I just cant put into words how happy and excited i am right now. That was one of the WIP’s that got me Choice Script games. Welcome back!

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Okay so I finally had the time to try it out. It’s a bit short to really judge and could use some polish.

The prose is fun and the character interactions are good for now, the trait system is also interesting, seems like you have a lot more freedom than in the previous game.

The text formatting could use some work, especially on the first page, some paragraphes could use to be cut into smaller ones.

The entire bit about explaining that you went into one of the researcher’s labs and found Silic is kinda written in a confusing manner?

It’s probably normal but trying to check the stat page crash the game.

That’s pretty much all so far, can’t wait for more!

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Some reason I can’t read my file anymore. It came up with this error message


I was about to ask a question about it for one of the notes but I can’t now cos I forgot what the note was

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I love how this post is awakening all the slumbering readers!

Welcome back, I missed this WIP so much!

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I’m so excited for this. I loved the other version of this and I’m sure I’ll love this version as well.

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