Freak: Falling Awake: Demo & Discussion(WIP)

Depends, if it’s something that’s supposed to come as a revelation for the character, keep it hidden.

If it’s just a lore dump that doesn’t actually have an impact on the character, it’s all good. If anything it would be better to have it on the timeline or in a glossary than by having the same lore dump but directed at our character.

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This is awesome, welcome back

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@Snoe Jw if the “day dreamer” personality stat means like “good/gentle”? Like in the original demo FANL

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I would say that im avoiding a trait morality. Good is a subjective explanation. But the daydreamer i would say is best described as easygoing and hopeful. Mildly forgetful
Does that clear it up for you?

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I do agree that “good” probably isn’t the best trait to add. But I think gentle can be a good one. It’s less of a morality thing and more of a demeanor

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A communication trait set i have in mind.
Direct
Charming
Shy
Smart-ass

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It would be nice if when picking our communication trait, we get a small flavor line telling us who / what our MC got it from.

I’m very interested in what in the lab influenced each trait of our MC, even if I understand it’s not support important.

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Communication Traits can be fun and of course, you can add more to it by blending them.
Like being a Direct Smart-ass or a Charming Smart-ass. You can blend two or more Traits to make communicating with First or communications from First more fun or interesting. I mean people have different traits and personalities so the way we speak or talk to others can be varied. Be sure to have fun while writing Snoe :slight_smile:

As for lore and history

you could set it up as a history book in First’s possession that seems to hunt them by showing up in their room that gives lore, history, and logs, choices and such, tho that would take a lot of time and work to code.

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Life check date November 2nd, I have arisen from the depths of lore building and refinement and found many a rabbit hole.
Anyway on a less dramatic note, I’ve been making sure all my background meshes before getting too far out over my ski’s in this lovely project, I officially Have more lore than I know what to do with an will build more. I added a tiny bit of fun things to the stat page, theming it as books or files that the main character comes across. So those were fun. and a few minor narrative additions.

So, yes still alive and progress has been made WOOT Woot
much luv

PS: I hope the nerd lore is not too nerdy

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Meow

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Awoof

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But what does a fox say?

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Yip!

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Screaming

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Oh yeah deffo screaming get loads of urban foxes where I live never understood where yip came from guessing the same place as oink and moo as opposed skkroilnk and maroohgg

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What the fuck? This of all posts is what got me the respected badge?

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The Feline Overlords of the inner circle approve

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Meowzer the superhero freak signs in approval of this message.

Gonna try that name in this game soon
Meowzer

She smiles and nods as you spell it out to her 'One More Time." Your name is Meowzer. The practiced dance of eloquent fingers respond “Well perhaps a fair and noble hero such as you would be gracious enough to forgive the Doctor’s forgetfulness.” She proceed preparing lunch for the two of you while also preparing the normal routine.

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Sorry but Meowzer is already taken

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holy shit talk about a blast from the past. looking forward to how this new version develops but the demo feels a bit underwhelming for the sudden revival of a years old wip.

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