Fox of Sunholt (WIP)

OK fair, but at least night itself gives black fur decent cover (and snow eventually melts).

What the heck is the pink fox gonna blend in with for cover? A flock of flamingos? :rofl:

I’m gonna do it for at least one. Might name him Sylvain since it sounds like Sylveon and when I played Pokémon X, my boy Eevee ended up evolving into that (much to my own shock, since I was training him at night, expecting him to turn into a Umbreon and not realizing I unintentionally met the requirements for the Fairy form instead). :laughing:

Forgot what the name change was, but I still remember the fun I had playing the demo and the various reactions from the choices (like the sash choices, the time as a baby, etc).

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Let me clarify what I meant on a few points:

  • The MC’s relationship with their sibling is meant to be antagonistic, they replaced another villain who I thought worked better as someone the MC had personal investment in. In my notes, I first described them as “bootleg Zuko/Azula” so…hopefully that gives you more of an idea as to what their role is. there are a couple of personality types for the sibling you can pick from as well. Totally understand if it’s not everyone’s cup of tea!

To be fair to Camille, she’s obnoxious regardless of your talent.

But I should explain that this applies more for an MC that chooses not to favor magic. If magic is your main weapon, you’re not “inept” simply not as strong as you could be (I think you’d probably get more out of the elemental specifications story-wise if your MC was a mage??? but don’t quote me on that I think we’d all have to playthrough it more first). The MC’s magic is sloppy because it’s self-taught, but with the right teaching they get better quick. Having a specification is actually optional, if you don’t do it you get the special secret element in which I come to your house and ask you why you hate me.

I’ve planned it out so the personality doesn’t change anything, but I’m sure in some case someone’s roleplaying may get them less “points” in an element they wanted. It’s a strange balance between letting it be a natural and just slapping in a choice that screams “DO YOU WANT THIS TO BE YOUR ELEMENT???”

also speaking of the elements they’re (while the weapons are more for flavor the elements have more of a story impact, which is why I was saying you may get more out of this if your MC is a mage)

  • Prime (this is the secret one in which I go to your house and cry)
  • Shadow
  • Wind
  • Spirit
  • Fire
  • Earth
  • River (water)
  • Ocean (emotion)
  • Mountain (ice)
  • Forest
  • Thunder
  • Sound
  • Time & Mind are also two elements, but the MC can’t specialize in them

Thank you! My dog says hello, i think, I don’t speak dog


im so happy some of you guys are going to be pink foxes that warms my heart. there’s also the option to have your hair color be different from your fur color, which i don’t know if anyone will use but THERE IT IS

and of course nothing is set in stone, i’d love feedback on the changes when you guys finally get to play them!

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While not knowing anything else and with Time not being an option I’d say either spirit or fire might suit my mc if going for that Kitsune feel. River, forest and of course thunder also seem nice.

As long as we don’t have to beg and grovel Camille to get the “right” training, fair enough.

Who are those, I presume they are either from some anime or a series too modern/recent for me to know?

Hmm…from what I remember from the old demo my mc didn’t much like thieving (which doesn’t mean they cannot have been forced into it just to survive and presumably even be good at it) or his uncle, but he was kinda in lust with Yoon.

Imagine expecting to see a normal fox with a normal fur color but then you get this slightly chaotic pink fey fox who can also talk and do magic :sparkles:

Yeah, she’s obnoxiously hot

Smod, I love you so much. But like… you CANT just spit out the words “special secret element” and not expect us to try and get it??

Our super special super secret element is…

Amazon Prime

Why doesn’t the whole FoS fandom just come to my house, we can all cry and watch The Office together

Nora drop the details and info about your pink fox MC in PMs and I’ll tell you more about my absolutely adorable p i n k baby girl Deliliah!!

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Imagine seeing a pink, dainty-looking fox and then hearing hearing his deep, masculine voice.

I think the pink alone would tell them the fox was far from a normal one. Especially if it was traveling with flamingos.

I think Anohana and Your Lie in April would elict more tears.

Or watch Wolf Children and that rain scene with the dad. It will really bring someone down in the dumps.

I imagine she is; she seems capable of fire magic.

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:fox_face:

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I think the fur color part id be thinking “ohmygoshthisissocute” then it talks and my brain has a minute long reboot and I debate out loud wether I just had a stroke, am hallucination from a gas leak or something, if animals all along could really talk, or if this animal was some sort of ancient spirit here to tell me the fey are real and this is the wild hunt.

nods

Unless you have a mansion, that is not gonna be logistically possible. Just not enough room for anything but a mansion or higher.

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Okay, bold of you to assume that I’m not actually a witch who lives in an enchanted tower obsessing about Mars and his adorably cute cat Sir Snuggles?? Like, you never know


Also, @smod is our spirit son still gonna be there or did he… poof…

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But dear Fay, however will you find the time to obsess over Leon then. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Little kitty-cat does not seem the sharing type tho. :thinking:

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Oh, kitty-cat can share a spot with Sir Snuggles :cat:

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i just assume everyone has seen Avatar like i assume everyone knows that orange juice with pulp in it is gross

@Fay he’s still in there :')

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OUR LITTLE BEBE IS STILL WITH US!! :’D

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Assumption proven wrong. Okay just Googled them. Zuko appears to be some sort of annoying (exiled) prince kid and Azula is apparently his sister and thus a princess. Hope our sibling isn’t an actual prince in the rewrite, that would really make the poor mc the unfavourite. :worried:

see…she is fair…and a total ass…let me smooche her :kissing_closed_eyes:

well I for one, I’m looking forward how the rewrite go . Regardless of what you are adding-taking away .

I love this story, and will love its rewrite! Good luck! :smile_cat:

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I.R.S & Wizard Cops: ok we got the evidence GO! GO! GO!

its ok though youll get off for time served since your obsessing over Sir Snuggles

blinks who are you talking about? slowly hides Leon into the closet Look shiney…gets distracted by own distraction

I love all the characters. they were so fun

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Welcome back smod! What do you mean by re-release btw? I was away for half a year so I haven’t caught up on what’s going on but I did miss this wip!

Smod is re-writing the demo!

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Catching up on the Tumblr I must say I really like this drawing:

Yoon cleans up really nice. :heart_eyes: Also from what snippets there are Yoon sounds super funny and adorable under that curiously high maintenance personality of his ( I mean a fashionable gentleman and a bad boy all seemingly in one package ::heart_eyes_cat: ). :hugs: :fox_face:
Speaking of which for a fey-fox demon boy running with a gang of gutter thieves Yoon seems to have some really upscale tastes that could probably put Addy to shame. So I’m wondering is our boy Yoon another down on his luck impoverished noble brat or something? :thinking:

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What about gray fox?
Also what kind of personality would affect shadow and/or mountain(ice).

unfavourite mean you can sew chaos and mayhem…:drooling_face:… and roll on the floor and hold your ribs as it explode around you! :smirk:

Yeah…let them hate my mc lol I have the last laugh…:smile:

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