So guys here it is. The new and hopefully enjoyable WIP. Written by me and Isabell.
It is based in a fictional forest called ‘ForeverGreen Forest’ home to a small tribe name DarkMoor. It is at this tribe the journey starts. ‘The Outcast of DarkMoor’ is a tale of superstitions, murder and possible revenge. When a young child is given the opportunity of power beyond belief the concequemces are grieve, death and chaos follow, and it is up to this youngster to battle the dark and carve a new future. Can this youngster stay strong under guilt? Or will they perish with the struggles of this once luscious and heavenly forest, or be condemned by the haunting claws which roam within it.
It is set in the region of ForeverGreen and varies outwards and around the area. Grey, stoned mountains and sandy, jewelled beaches all feature. The place is fictional however many elements are similar to tribal eras. Magical creatures may roam along with common wildlife.
Main Character (You)
Your character -you-, is the son/daughter of Cheif El’Kadmar, the leader of the DarkMoor tribe. At the age of 16 (like all members of the tribe), a coming of age trial has to be completed, and it is on this trial your life changes. One night while hunting for a prestigious animal you stay the night in a cavern. Unaware of what’s lurking in the shadows. Unknown to you, you meet a person willing to give you all the power nessacary to do the things you want to do. Not knowing the concequences, you accept and that is when the adventure starts.
This current demo is only the structure of chapter 1. Going for 6.1k words.
The next update will consist of the fulling fleshing out of Chapter 1, including choices and a free roam basis.
Any questions just post on this thread and I/we will be sure to answer back. If it’s any spoilers your interested in personal message me and I’ll tell you if that’s what you desire.
Thank you and we hope you will enjoy this hopefully original game;
JLBH and Isabell