So, I was going to wait until I was further along to post this, but I’m concerned I may be making mistakes that I should fix sooner rather than later. So as not to bias anyone, I’m not actually going to say what I think those mistakes might be… but I’d love to get some feedback, particularly constructive criticism. I’m also happy to swap feedback, if anyone who plays this has a WIP they’d also like feedback on. Just give me a link!
(It currently stops quite abruptly. You should, however, get a screen that says “TO BE CONTINUED” – if you don’t, please let me know where it stopped!)