Werecows?
Were-killer rabbits?
Werellamas? (Not to be confused with āwe are llamas?ā, which is what my iPod thought)
Weremaggotry?
Weremaggotry?
Yesā¦ Of coarse the maggotry is a reference to a local ex-DJ that probably none of you have ever heard of.
Thanks guys, I knew school would slow me down, so hopefully I can still get most if not all of it done by summer. 
Hello guys I am back
My sincerest apologies for such a big delay. I am currently writing my short story. Be on the lookout.
Also, I am actually looking for an editor so if anyone would like to edit my story. Please let me know and give me your contact information. I will go over some stuff with you and then you can hopefully have fun editing. Thanks and sorry again.
āLetās find some friendsā -Amumu
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I have a name if you can change it for me good sir, its called Factions: The Raids of the Divided unless that game name isnāt usable.
Hold the line-Kirrahe
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@Theboywhocould Long live regular member perks. (The name has been changed in the topic title. If itās not exactly what you wanted it to be feel free to mention it and I or someone else will change it.)
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I like it, you guys and gals are too kind 
What do you guys think, the extra āTheā is unnecessary right?
Should we change the game name to
Factions: Raids of the Divided
That way you can say āhey have you played Factions: Rotād its pretty coolā, like rotted heheā¦
Can we get another name change to Factions: Raids of the Divided
Also good news,
My artist said they will be sending the cover art after that I can submit the game.
I just wanted to say thank you to whoever has supported me so far.
can I still beta test this game?
I have sent in my submission, hopefully all goes well. Thanks for everything. I remember when I first found out about this site and all the CoGs I distinctly remember being in awe at all the talented works and thinking Iām just a reader I canāt make any games like that.
Hopefully, I too will be able to inspire someone like those who inspired me.
Congratulations on sending in your work! 
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Factions: The Raids of the Divided is can now be tested using this link. Remember this game is quite short because itās the intro. I want to make sure people like it before I write more on it.
Also I have taken out losing when your Morality reaches below 0% to make it easier after some discussing and thinking.
Feel free to comment about likes and dislikes, I realize some might think itās too short but ^^^^.
Thanks and enjoy
http://dashingdon.com/play/Theboywhocould/factions:-raids-of-the-divided/mygame/
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Really no comments :ā(
is it that bad?
Well It seemed like necromacy.
With such long delay.
Yeah, sorry about that. I had stopped due to my semesters at universityā¦ twas a tough one. Anyway, I am actually working on my next storygame in case anyone wanted to know. It is still in its beginning stages though.
The game looks good. Though it lacksā¦ flavor? Idk I just find it weird that the MC just says yes to a random stranger to investigate something thatāll take him to the differeng factions without the MC having an ulterior reason.
Like what Jjcb said and I found it weird how the MC just randomly goes along to investigate and the guy just started asking me where do I want to liveā¦ It didnāt have a sense of realism. I feel that there should be a prequel chapter to help establish your reasons for wanting to go investigate or why your chosen to I bc estigate in the first place
Also idk, but the fact that the first choice set are not capitalized really bothers me.
(Note: I have not gone very far yet. Only first few pages so far)