EGO TRIP (A Psychological Adventure, Demo)

I finished one of the paths and I must say I found the story very intriguing! I am looking forward to see how it develops.

I did notice a few spelling, Grammer and problems with time and one more bug.

The bug is the king path. It is unaccessible.

“That must be where ‘Cherry’ wishes to meet you. It wasn’t far, maybe an hour worth on foot, less by train.
You ponder if this was a good idea, considering alternatives.”
“wishes”, “ponder” and “considering” seem to show this part is happening in the present while “wasn’t” and “was” seem to show that it has already happened in the past.

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