Dragon Racer (WIP) - Updated 1/30/17 (post 615)

I feel like he would go another one of his rage fits for sure lol. And of course, I’d be honored!

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Just FYI, the link is now the link for the actual demo, meaning there’s less chapters and some errors were corrected. Continue telling me if you see anything though.:grin:

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I was just playing random WIP’s when I came across this one and thought about Choice of Dragons. At first I thought this was going to be pretty boring but as I went along it got more and more interesting and I like that. This is great and I can’t wait to see what else comes out of it.

. . . So I don’t know if I can ask this but is Nyx a witch? Cause she’s really giving me the witchy feels right now. Also will I ever see Jack again cause I’m kinda attached to that kid now.

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Yes you will see Jack again, I couldn’t just let him run off.

And hmm it’s interesting, can’t say anymore cause it is a bit too much of a spoiler. Though I do like that you brought that up cause I have recently been thinking about doing a big overhaul of the first chapter and of the characters, meaning that a good many of the scenes will change. First chapter wise some have told me that they’d wish I’d expand on it more, I’m still thinking though.

Awwww. Well I didn’t see much wrong with the characters but it’s your story :grin:

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Quick Question:

Has anybody found it difficult to get high friendship with both Cassius and Shader at the same time? Specially if you’re not romancing the other? Or do you find that one is always significantly higher than the other?

In my playthroughs, I think I’ve mostly managed to keep Cassius or Shader a good 20% higher than the other depending on who I was trying to romance (try being the key word with Cassius :joy:). What is considered a high friendship though? 'cause I think I got Cassius to ~50 while I got Shader to ~70 and vice versa.

I can’t say I’ve tried keeping them both as friends yet, but I can think of a few combination of choices to even them out. I think what mostly gives one of the relationships a boost is one of the choices at the stables that doesn’t really give you a hint as to who you’re going to spend time with.

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I’d count high being anything above 50, cause in the game that’s neutral grounds anything higher or lower will make them either a rival or a friend. But from your numbers it doesn’t really seem like you’ve ran into a lot of issues with it so that’s good.

Yea I created Cassius and know his personality and choices and I still can’t get him to like me lol!

/snickers/ Well, in my case it was more about Cassius not being interested in what my dude was packin’. :joy:

If there’s anyone that’s kind of been neglected in my playthroughs, it’s been Nyx. I love the gal, but there’s just so little time to interact with her if you don’t seem to be pursuing her as an RO. I think, by the end of my last run… she was at 43% or 46%?

This did jog a memory of mine, though. I remember that when the gang decided to see if my MC had the skill and mettle to ride with them, my bond with my white dragon dropped when we got to the part that he had to swim. Is that supposed to happen with the white dragon? It dropped about 5%, IIRC, so he went from 70% to 65%. I’m not sure if it’s 'cause I never raised his swimming skill, but I did the same with a gold dragon, and that one’s bond didn’t drop.:scream:

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When I was romancing Nyx my relationship with Shader was pretty high without trying, 60+, while my relationship with Cassius was pretty low. Somewhere in the 30s if I remember right. But like I said that was without trying anything special for them.

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@Lithophene In one of the future chapters you’ll have the opportunity to hang out with all of them one on one if you wish, it’ll give you the opportunity to either improve or tick them off more as well as learn /cough/ was I saying something, hmm I think I just about to give away a spoiler. :grin: And I’ll check on the white dragon part and get back to you on it.

@SeventhJackel Yea that’s cause Shader and Nyx usually agree with one another on a lot of stuff so if you boost one you boost the other most of the time - that’s why I was wondering if Cassius hardly went up because he’s the oddball.

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Alright so update on the situation. The only part that will decrease you bond in that chapter is if you fuel him with magic instead of trusting him. So there’s probably another area that caused it to go down.

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That’s so weird. Maybe I just didn’t notice the drop until that moment. :open_mouth: Thanks for checking that out though!

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Bruh, I couldn’t clean up my sketches without erasing everything every ten seconds, so I’m just going to share those with you. Don’t mind the mess. :sweat_smile: I’m not really happy with how Nyx came out, so I’m just gonna post Shader for now and link her. :flushed:

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Awesome drawing @Lithophene that’s even better than my manga drawings…Well 3/4 of them :smile:

Aww grumpy Shader!! I could actually see him making that exact face when he comes up to you post kiss. And Nyx looks great too! Great drawings.

Just wondering, is the part where your about to go to wimrborne the furthest we can go?

I’m going to update it so that the furthest you can play is right after you get to the Red Marauder territory and meet Shader.

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Hi everyone! I just wanna say this game is pretty cool even though it a demo so keep up the good work. I have a question? Is the demo short or is thier more in the demo cause for some reason i cant get past farther than being a work keeper and it ends the game? Also another question can you win the race in the beginning or do you always lose?

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Thank you! And for the answers to your question, no that’s the entire demo, the rest will be released and must be bought. And no you will always lose that race in the beginning, it’s possible to stay in first place till the very end, but no matter what you will fail on the last leg of it.

Also I’m looking for feedback on the classes at the moment. Does anyone have any problems or thoughts concerning the classes? Do you feel like I should just take the classes out (besides the Regulation one) and have you focus more on racing?