This is good idea to be inserted in 10 years time skip, like how MC form develop into maturity, the story seem to suggest MC still growing and they’re just a baby in comparison to dragon in other sighting, what MC learn while on the run, what kind of ability MC get when reaching next growth stage, like some real dragon (Komodo Dragon) could actually do Parthenogenesis, could open interesting choice now since Dragon in this world also facing extinction.
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LOVE IT…!! I even make a little fanart of my MC lol HAHAHA…! (it looks kinda weird cause i haven’t drawn in months cause of exam lmao)
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Whatever image you tried to post didn’t show properly.
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Absolutely love 
Great start!!.
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While I agree with almost everything you’ve said, I don’t think features like storing food and setting up defences around the lairs are necessary. (I have a feeling that the MC will be constantly on the run in this story.) This isn’t the “Dragon Chronicles”, lol. Let’s not overwhelm the aspiring author of this WIP with too many ideas.
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True, but I would like more option catering to the dragon nature more.
Right now the mc feels like someone with superpower or magic user than anything dragon related, nothing wrong with that but it does lessen my interest somewhat.
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I somewhat like it. I wish we had more “oh shit they caught me” moments. Maybe expand eves village more or at least have a small bit more happen there with player input. I feel eves village kinda blurs past.
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My question is what happened to Gavin in the last 10 years 
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I think he joined the adventurers like he wanted to since it’s hinted near the end about a hunter with high perspective skill. He has that skill at a good level to see our eyes so that hunter is probably him. That hunter was too desperate to buy our item we sold at the new settlement. Also the hunter cares more about his personal mission instead of rank like the others which is more evidence it him.
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Well that’ll be fun going run into the childhood friend
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What happen to G in 10 years time skip (spoiler)
Nobody know the answer of that question except that G is roaming the land as adventurer and getting stronger as well, His appraisal ability probably getting stronger as well because the adventurer clearly talking about this, he is pretty famous btw, he is E rank but stronger than what his rank suggest since he never take test to upgrade his rank and the rumor circulating from his fellow adventurer that he is allegedly “roaming” The land for his personal quest and appear to be looking for something or someone.
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Wanna bet He is going to recognize MC from glancing to their eyes? 😁
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We both know you’re gonna win that bet:rofl:
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If I not mistaken in that same part they say that he was coming from or to the desert area where is apparently the other dragonkin
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Maybe they’ve been investigating that dragon we keep hearing rumors about. Maybe they are trying to find MC thinking they are with the other dragons in that region after the incident.
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This have nothing to do with the wip, but I couldn’t stop thinkig about this video when I was reading
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That’s stupidly funny lmfao. I like the “how fuck do we get rid of these fucking dragons” fantasy more.
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Yeah but that other one is literally described a bloodthirsty monster unlike like us who hid in plain sight. Maybe he thinks he might find us near the dragon since it’s one of our own kind since it’s his only lead when we left the forest without a trace.
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That’s exactly what I thought. It’s not like they have a lot of info after MC disappeared. Any lead is a good lead after so long of searching without any kinda trace.
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I’m more interested in his reaction to finding us depending on how we dealt with the bandits. Defensively, cripple or bloodbath.
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