I know my comment was a replying to someone saying they wanted to play as a purple dragon kin with a tail instead of wings. That made me picture a purple version of Liza one of my favorites characters in Death March. 
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I dont have that problem you guys are having i can with whats given in the story fully envision what my MC looks like.
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@Valixon
Well, good on you.
@Revan_Alek_Shan
I also like to imagine the MCās true form as an anthropomorphic winged Western dragon for now. But I still prefer to know the authorās vision. And if the MCās true form has a dragon tail, it would be awesome if we could use it as an effective/deadly weapon in combats.
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Yeah getting hit by a dragon tail has to hurt a lotā¦ that as a secondary weapon to be used as either a blunt attack or to trip up enemies would be as useful as the scene were the mc uses their wings to protect both themselves and their friend from the bandits.
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It would be nice to have some unique hair colors. Gold hair can be bypassed as blonde to humans. Iām all for some unique colors with customization.
Like the eyes. Adding a rainbow color would be dope as hell. A swirling rainbow color. Donāt know exactly how it would be hidden though. Maybe the second eyelids can help since the glowing white eyes can be mistaken for light blue without perception lol.
A gold scale + swirling rainbow eyed dragon kin sounds crazy lol.
@Zarkrai if I remember correctly you enjoy dragon related stuff. So I wanted to mention you. Did not know if youāve already played. If you have I apologize.
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I imagine the mc similar to the protagonist of Crystal Story II
I didnāt finish the game and I only played it once when I was younger (as a child) and the protagonist was kind of marked in my mind with some dragon scales under the clothes and a tail but nothing complete just some areas that had scales like the neck.Sorry for the bad English.
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Coding error (Plus you can pick two options for prideānot sure if thatās intentional or not tbh 
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Also thank you for the big update!
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I have to say I am really enjoying this WIP. My only request is save slots pretty please. It is frustrating to get to chapter two or three and have no ability to save for future updates
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Author said this is planned for next update about the save that is.
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thank you for letting me know, I appreciate it.
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Hypnotic rainbow eyes. 
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Yes lmfao. Just look into my eyes, everything is okayā¦
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Tumblr?
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Well since people suggesting weird eye color how about adding heterocromic eyes as well.
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The story has potential, but it feels extremely rushed. Iād say take your time draw out the beginning scenes a bit more, because it all flashes in a blur almost. I meet a kid barely got to know him, then get told weāre close. If there was more showing, not tell like scenes of Mc watching gavin train or them going shopping or playing together, Iāll feel more real. I know this is a work in progress, but this is just my advice since I really enjoyed it. Do more showing rather than telling, and youāll be fine.
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I read this WIP instead of going to sleep and Iām glad I did! My only regret is being so early so itās still a bit short but Iāll gladly follow the process. My first thought was ādragons, mehā¦ā but Iām SO glad I read because it changed my mind! Thereās the perfect amount of descriptions (I love to read those, and theyāre neither too short nor long). And the characters have names and feel fleshed out, no one feels two dimensional. I love reading the way we slowly but surely come into our power and learn. It feels accurate that we have to be around humans to learn their behavior and disguise ourselves. I also enjoy the pace of the story so far and the world building doesnāt feel like itās thrown at us. Sorry if this is a bit jumbled Iām writing this on no sleep. Btw if anything happens to Gavin Iāll replay on high cruelty. Anyway kudos to you Author, I canāt wait for the next updates! Take care of yourself!
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Just finished the demo and really enjoyed it excited for this !
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Finally, I can become a humanoid Toothless.
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Not a huge deal, but there is a bug- The elemental display after choosing your element and fleeing the village sometimes doesnāt show up, the page skips to the people reacting to the display in fear and awe.
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In a way so I am. No knows about the camouflage yet and there is no fool prove way of preventing us from hiding in plain sight. Maybe it could happen soon on our trip with the adventurers if we slip up
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