Demigods: Rise Of The Fallen God

Thanks! Im 16 at 11:59 am tomorrow

yeah happy birthday

Happy birthday!! feliz cumpleanos que cumplas muchos mas

:slight_smile:

Ha your my age and headhunter too

:> :>

What’s with the faces?..

ok can u guys plz stop :smiley: no offense but i dont want that here

Lol thanks for birthday wishes, lol i just thought they looked funny, lol

srry i was learning some html in the recent days so i dint get much of the story done i will try my best to make enough for a demo this weekend

demo is ready but there is some problem so if you go in the stats you have to click the stats button again to return to the game:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/118028074/web/mygame/index.html

the ending is a little bit lame i might need to redo that

Third or forth page it includes

with the rest of the text on the page.

Defiantly redo the end.

Two things I noticed so far:

You gotta break up some of those text walls. Especially when you are overhearing the conversation between the man and woman. I would suggest something along the lines of:

Woman: [talk talk talk talk talk]

Man: [talk talk talk talk talk]

How it goes right now is:

Woman: [talk talk talk talk talk] Man: [talk talk talk talk talk] Woman: [talk talk talk talk talk] Man: [talk talk talk talk talk]

And I don’t know, but for me that is harder to follow.

Also, someone addressed me by my name, and it looks like you used the $!{name} function…only problem is I had not defined my name, so the person addressed me as ‘unknown’

Other than that, what I read looks promising, and I wish you the best of luck!

thnx i will redo all that i forgot to put the name choice thnx guys

just curious who thinks this is my best game yet???

here is the new link with the update the old link wont work:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/118028074/Demigods/mygame/index.html

tell me if you find anyother mistake
and if i should change the background color and which color

Not yellow