Hey I just finished reading your demo and I absolute adored the concept! The Japanese notion on the otherworldly has always interested me and to see you do it justice is just wonderful
You write really well and your prose accurately gives off a comforting yet unsettling vibe that is quite vital for anything dealing with ghosts be it horror or not
Lastly, might I suggest adding the option to input a custom name?
Other than that, well done! Iām eager to read more!! 