@Owlet, I agree with you about Stoic and Crook. I’ve been intentionally dragging things out with them, especially Stoic, even though many posters here have asked for those relationships to move faster. I want to go slooooow with them, especially Crook, who is a delicate flower. 
@JTAL, thanks for confirming my word choice! I kept thinking, “linearizing” sounds right! And you and FG must be Brits, I guess, since I notice you both use “s” instead of “z.” You crazy Brits. And yes, I agree the whole underdog thing works well in most plots. I wanted to make the MC the underdoggiest of the underdogs. The least powerful student in the crappiest school. Not even on anyone’s radar.
@Fallaner, Yeah I’d consider snarky especially in a first-person POV novel because, let’s face it, you need some internal dialogue and what MC wouldn’t secretly think some funny/unflattering things about Shine, Wombat, Tolly, etc? I mean, even the school as a whole is ripe for being ridiculed, at least initially.
@hishman13, yeah the gender/sexuality/RO part of a novel is the biggest stumbling block for me, because no matter, what I choose, many people (at least on here) wouldn’t feel engaged to the MC anymore.
@Hozay, you wrote the 2,000st post! Yay! I couldn’t find any celebratory emotes, but here are Stoic and Wombat and Mega Cat

@FairyGodfeather, Yeah I was just playing with ways to make it different without changing a lot of the canon. Tress could tell a story without being overly snarky or overly dramatic, and she’s one of the more eloquent characters. I mentioned Crook because he’s the one I most relate to, and I think I find his voice more easier than I do the others. And telling it from Origami’s perspective, with her narration ending suddenly, would be fascinating to tackle! If only I was a 13-year-old girl…wait…I didn’t mean that.
@Blackbeard, are you talking about Part II of the interactive novel? I’ll continue to consider that, but I just finished editing the last “upgrade” scene in Part I, so as of that point, there are now 12 different combinations of weapons - Acrobat I, II, and II, Sharpshooter I, II, and III and so on. It’s a lot to tackle, let me tell you.