College Tennis: Origin Story (WIP) - Updated 8 Jun '25 [968k words]

There already is a cheat mode so tweaking stats is just pointless at this point

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Yeah, at this point, you’re asking for a second story. Which I feel is not a reasonable thing to ask for.

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No, the game doesn’t have option for this, it would mean there needs a lot more content to write, and all for basically pointless stroking of player’s ego.

Getting to 4th spot already is an amazing feat for MC, it’s okay that players who have couple years of experience and physical development over them are still better. Also, nothing wrong with taking more time to reach the top than just few weeks and 1-2 chapters. In your typical sport story it takes MC years and working to get there is the entire point.

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I know…
I just took a chance and asked
I like the story anyway and i am fine if the answer is no.

Has anyone managed to get the Invincible First Week achievement? You get it if you got first in the strength test and the run, got a Devil’s Dozen and beat Emerson, but I don’t think you can get it from how the code is since it asks for weights_position = 1, but the least it can be is 2, 1 from weight lifting and 1 from jumping.

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That’s correct, there seems to be a few similar bugs in the game script regarding this:

*if ((run_position = 1) and (weights_position = 1)) and ((misses_drill = 0) and (won_emerson))

this is the one you mention, and then there’s couple earlier in 1-2_secondtraining.txt:

        *if (run_position < 4) or (weights_position = 1)
          "Ha! I'm sure Rayyan wasn't very happy about you beating ${team_him}. Tobin seems chill though. And Deepal too."
// ...
        *if (run_position < 3) or (weights_position < 1)
          "Ha! I'm sure Rayyan wasn't very happy about you beating ${team_him}," Sam says. "Tobin seems chill though. And Deepal too."

It’s not possible for weight_position to be either 0 or 1 at this point, but the or masks it.

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I had a question will the third part release with the update?

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anybody got any tips on the singles match for an all-rounder finesse 36/serve 30/tactics 29 build? I see no hope looking at the checks and don’t really wanna rebuild to keep my win streak… :melting_face:

Summary

Guillaume’s grey eyes twinkle. “Of ma jock, in particular.”

You see the flash of warmth in her gaze. You lean in to whisper, for his ears alone, “I’ll make sure to put on a good show, then.”

Should be his

You slip Rayyan a small smile, and she returns it with some relief, her previously cold expression warming as she meets your gaze.

After a beat, you turn back to Carolina; it’s honestly rather laughable that she thinks you’re going to be bothered by something as amateurish as her bad trash talk.

Rayyan quickly follows you to the bench. She frowns at you, concerned. “You… OK?”

“I’m fine,” you say, shrugging. “She’s obviously an idiot. It really didn’t bother me much—but thanks for having my back.” She’d already looked pretty intimidating before, but now she looks set on annhilation.

You shrug. “Whatever. I don’t care. But thanks for having my back.”

She nods. “Let’s go out there and destroy them.”

A bit of redundancy when choosing to gush over Rayyan defending us saying you don’t care

But you’re not sure how long you’ll be able to hang on, especially since—as thte more untested of the two, your opponents are gunning hard for you.

Typo should be the

Go on the attack—rely on my racket technique, sharp volleys, and powerful groundstrokes to go on a relentless assault on Emily. [S/V + Finesse] + Agility

This choice on the singles should either have been +Strength or need to change the code to check for Agility insted of Strength

You know your Cargill teammates are here for you too—and would’ve gladly given you the comfort you sought, but Sam was more than just comfort—he was a refuge in the storm; you needed him—more than you needed platitudes about how well you’d played, more htan you needed people downplaying the pain of a loss or assuring you that you’d win next time, you just wanted someone to hold you.

Typo should be the

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Wasn’t the public release of the sneak peak 9b supposed to be on 22nd ?

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If you have 2 stats over 33, you should be able to win all of them. Of course, you have to choose the correct option based on your skills and so

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It was technically supposed to be a week after the sneak peek for supporters (which has slipped to Jun 17th) so that’d make it scheduled for 24th. But i’d guess the author is busy with things™ and it’ll happen when she finds opportunity for it. All good Sams and Gs come to those who wait. :v

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Hi everyone!! Thank you so much for your patience!!

Sneak peek 9b is available for everyone on the main demo link!!

I screwed up my files a little bit by mixing up the sneak peaks + public + unreleased new content in the same file, and had to take some time to untangle the bits. Anyway. That’s done, and I can’t wait to hear what you guys think!!

Saves should still be good from the previous playthroughs. Let me know if there’s any bugs/issues!

Full release

Unfortunately, the full release will take a bit more time than I anticipated—but I might release a third sneak peek just to tide folks over. Stay tuned!

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Your fingers grip Sam's back, as though clinging on for deer life.

This scene might make my MC feel like a deer in the spotlights alright, but that’s probably a typo. :v

On a more general note, the rest of it can come across a bit unintentionally confusing/funny because some parts of it refer to MC seeing things, e.g.: and if you don't pull back, you can read the intention in Sam's eyes and that’s not exactly possible if the player has picked the option to Squeeze my eyes shut, wondering what the hell we're about to do. Maybe some other cues can be used in this branch, like perception of Sam’s body heat or their breath being close enough to feel it against the skin?

(the subsequent option My eyes flutter shut etc could probably take into account these eyes may already be closed, too)

completely aside from all my nitpicking, squeeeeeee

  *else
    It had been weeks since you'd last seen Sam, and you'd been afraid that all this time apart would change the relationship you had with each other. 
//...
    *if (sam_commit)
//...
      *goto go_to_room

This branch has a minor bug: because the jump to go_to_room happens only if sam_commit is active, for MC and Sam who just had their first kiss at the bar but didn’t make commitment out of it the game will instead fall through to next bit of the script, which just happens to be sam_talks_about_first_kiss The *goto should be probably moved one level to the left, to prevent that.

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OH MY LOOORD, Sam~~~

Won the match, visited by my beloved best friend, and that scene at the end~

What’s not to like~ As much as I like the others… She’s won my heart already~

Thank you for the hard work! and for the sneak peek~

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Btw, if you’ve enjoyed the game, I strongly recommend you to watch the anime “Baby Steps”.

In my opinion, it’s the best tennis anime out there.

Although the manga was cancelled (big mistake) and the show, consisting of 2 seasons, doesn’t cover all of it, I assure you that you’ll enjoy it.

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Yes! This is a terrific anime! Baby Steps and the older Ace Wo Nerae (Aim for the Ace) are realistic depictions of tennis. The latter features a female player.

The more well-known anime, Prince of Tennis, has what I call super saiyan type tennis. Anyone familiar with Dragonball Z can guess what I mean! Fun in its own right, but it’s not realistic at all.

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Now now, i really wouldn’t call anime with players who are obsessed with “painting pictures with their racket” realistic. It’s slightly less silly than how some of the sport anime gets, but it still has the usual “super moves”, one-trick-pony opponents etc tropes.

That said, yes, it is fun.

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Well things have been quite for a few days now. Just when we were about to get the good material (new chapter) this file mishap had to happen . Hopefully the author will be able to get it right soon.

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Is coach Sy a LI? The mc and her seems to have unintentional fire with each other

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