YAAAAAAAY!!!
trying to play straight Male MC
His had a slender figure that was definitely pleasing to my eyes. His dark black hair was well-kept and tidy,nose perfectly symmetrical, lips slightly full. He could definitely give Touya a run for his money. What kept me looking the most was his eyes. His piercing golden eyes.
(He)
so, why did MC find Kioshi pleasing to his eyes ?
Im not going to lie it needs a spell check and im not big on the names in it or the anime feel it has but I enjoyed it. The wroting style is pretty darn good and even though i dont like the anime feel it was still pretty darn good. The story is very interesting and if i can read all of it by some miracle i would love to finish the series and see a branch off from it. Very interesting in a good way to say at least
Your character is straight, not blind.
Just kidding, I swear ^^
you never fail me lmbo
Ooooops~ xâD coding errors~ Thank you~~~
Halloween Edition is finally up~ xâD It;s more like a Christmas thing now than Halloween hahahaha
So sorry for the long wait and delay~ C: but I do hope you all would enjoy this little piece ~ The short special edition has around 15k words in total.
The link can be found on the first post. c:
PS. Rainer route has some bugs that are being smoothed up now, so play at your own risk~
And to all my beta testers c: The beta build is also upcoming up soon but most probably after Christmas TwT
DION!!! im coming to you now~
just take your time we (at least me) will be here waiting patiently~
alright, time to check it out~
hillarious!!
aww~ where do i sign for it to be official XD
wow⌠of course we are~
(ehm⌠did you miss something there or that âtheâ isnât supposed to be there ?)
correct it, im his other half~
[quote] âScared?â I teased Dion.
âWith you here, nope.â Now I wasnât sure whether I was the one being teased instead.âBut, if youâre scared, Iâm always here for you.â [/quote]
im melting right now~ didnât know Dion could be so damn romantic!!
there is an error after the bathroom scene no matter what i choose
(choice) Run towards where we came from
(choice) Try to look for another way out
and just want to say i cant stop grinning when reading this halloween edition⌠my MC already far too deep in love with Dion coz this short date story
You read really fast xDDD Now you can go and try all the outfits for different reactions.
Arenât you surprise thereâs not much typo in this one? Ohohoho I felt like I just earned an achievement xâD
And I fixed the error >ww<
will do that~
well, i noticed⌠i cant find any typo in my 2 playtrough, now iâll lose my typo-hunting job lol jk. and this is worth the wait~ thank you, for the chance to date spending time with Dion
will playing it again for several times~ cant stop grinning
EDIT :
I just shrugged sheepishly. I knew Dion was going to be a werewolf, and I just happen to âaccidentallyâ picked the same costume. Donât we look cute together?
now im sure you are teasing spoiling me!! damn, this is too cute, cant move on and trying another RO route for a while im dying of happiness!! XDDD~
Hehehehe~ Iâm so happy to hear this from you ~
PS. Rainerâs route is now fixed.
Alright c: fixed. Itâs so strange cause the game had passed quicktest xâD yet all these little things still pop out
I absolutely loved tsubasaâs reaction when you choose the mermaid costume I also liked the supervillan outfit nice Easter egg for persona 5
Kioshi is just too adorable
I loved his reaction to the samurai costume
some report from Touya route and sorry for bringing some bad news to ruin your âtypo achievementâ celebration
as MC were talking with Touya before, you could change She to Sibyl so we will not confusing that She is refered to Sibyl and not to Touya XD im literally confused at first and notice the mistake later XD
[quote]
âProtect me Touya.â I teased.
âYou know I will.â Touya bowed lightly. He was my own knight in shining armor for tonight.
âWhat about me?â Dion was pouting over my betrayal. [/quote]
awww~ poor Dion, are you jealous ? *wink~ or not (as he was already discussing about a team pose with certain witch *getting jealous myself
[quote] âIâm glad to have you here with me.â I smiled. I was overjoyed to have Touya with me.
He just smiled and said nothing. [/quote]
i know that just Touya being âTouyaâ but i cant helped myself for being hurt
it will be better if you add âasâ before if, so it will be like this : âit was as if bla bla blaâŚâ
that sneaky bast*rd MC good job!!
Some Error (i assumed it from indent or code or something like that)
after Touya and MC finish the haunted house the scene jump to when they failed it and then jump to Rainer scene, even if it was supposed to be Kioshi at the group.
and i decide to take that as a chance to bug hunting Rainer route and i met the jumping scene error at the end as well
and i noticed while there is a scene after i choose Touya for the pair like this one :
[quote] âProtect me Touya.â I teased.
âYou know I will.â Touya bowed lightly. He was my own knight in shining armor for tonight.
âWhat about me?â Dion was pouting over my betrayal.
[/quote]
there is nothing at Dion scenes, when i choose Dion it just jump to this scene :
is that intentional ?
oh, there is another âweird sceneâ that i notice at the begining, some costume doesnât trigger any reaction from the group, i might take a note for which costumes that happend later while im checking Kio route
Thank you so much!!! And about Dionâs scene, nope TwT thereâs suppose to be something like that as well~ I just found out the error and Iâm fixing them right now ~~
@Curious_Boy do tell me which costume reactions doesn;t trigger later >www< Iâm checking the codes too but I might miss something
EDIT
Everything should be alright now c: I forget to add in where the scenes should properly end for Touya and Rainer. xâD so sorry guys!!
I know right
Hehehehe Yup! Itâs such a shame that P5 is getting a delay TwT
Knock.Knock.
There should be a space after the punctuation.
âWeâre one of the lucky ones, to be able to materialize our subconscious or dreams into beings call Reveries.â
âCallâ should be âcalled.â
On another note, I couldnât see the new content. Can anybody help me? @Ros_e?
Touya brows furrowed, his eyes narrowed. âWonât you attract unwanted attention this way?â
âBut youâll protect him right Touya?â Sibyl giggled.
âOf course!! Without a doubt. I will make sure no harm comes into his way.â He bowed lightly.
Ah, Touya. Itâs good to be back being vaguely confused about exactly how you feel about me.
âYou can suck my blood anytime.â I winked. He was a gorgeous vampire and I didnât mind playing his victim. My mind was running wild with images of his teeth sinking into my skin, the way he was lavishing me, gave me a certain thrill.
âI wouldnât possibly do that.â His brows narrowed into a worried expression. My heart fell, my fantasy poofed, looks like my attempt at flirting has failed.
âWouldnât possiblyâ doesnât really make sense. It would either be âcouldnât possiblyâ or just âwouldnâtâ (âwould neverâ might be even better). Also, daw, Touya. So naive.
âI love the breeze.â I smiled at Sibyl. The way her short hair sway against the wind, made my heart flutter a little.
Wait, why am I flirting with Sibyl now? Undo! Undo!
âKioshi, Iâll be with you.â Tsubasa trapped Kioshi in her clutches.
I am suddenly terrified for the poor boyâŚ
the interior was themed similarly like our dorm room; victorian.
âVictorianâ should be capitalised.
Touya wrapped his slender fingers around my hand. âI wonât let anything happen to you.â
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