Carhalow (WIP 02.29.16)

My childhood was rather plain compared to what others speak of. It’s the typical strained relationship with my step-father and my mother, moved a lot, had/has depression blah blah blah. And I hated school sooo lol I’d never want to be a child again.

I will say this though, I enjoy the childhood part of the MC because it was way better than mine. Minus the scary antler guy in the forest.

And yeah I’m all for more relationship delevopments since it could also work as character delevopment when it refers to the MC’s thoughts.

Found an error (probably).

Pretty sure Valena isn’t 30 years older than me. At least I think so. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

It also says Morgan is 35 and your mother is 54.

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You are the youngest child, after all :wink:

I’ll fix that for you…

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I’m glad this is useful to you :smirk:

Random test first. Then play it through once or twice to make sure things connect right. Compile it with all your needed files, lol. That’s all I do.

Oh, that’s true. MC character development is fun to work on. Relationships with the characters reflect on the MC… I had somehow forgotten about that lol.

That wasn’t fun for you?? :wink:

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lol I was ready to fight him :smiling_imp: but got knocked out :cry:

Great and interesting story! I enjoyed the demo very much. I just have to point out, in the stat screen, I think you made a mistake with the age and stuff like I think Morgan is just 2/3 years older than me, but when I went to the stat screen it says that he is 27 and that I am just 7 years old. I hope you get to fix that because its just a tad bit confusing. Other than that, it was pretty good. I decided to not give a rat’s butt about my older sister and fall desperately in-love with Morgan (nothing incestuous) I jus really love my quiet older brother. Cath is pretty interesting too. I was expecting him to be a butthole, but he’s such a total sweetheart. I’ve also decided to hate my father. I mean, where the hell is he all the time? That’s just a personal opinion. Great job! I look forward to reading any future updates that you intend to make. Good luck! :smiley:

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But that was the best part of it, besides it wasn’t all scary antler guy, there was also the cute fox.

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You’ll get your rematch. One day… :relieved:

Haha, yeah, I’m really sorry about that. It’s a bug I’m working on rn. It’ll either be gone tonight, or I’ll take it off until I can figure out wtf is wrong.

He’s busy, y’know? Doing stuff… and things.

But thanks for playing the game, and giving such good feedback! I’m glad you like some of the characters-- and yeah, Cath is a very nice boy haha.

Yes, the cute fox that lead you deep into the forest and brought you to a strange and mystical creature :smile_cat:

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That’s true too. It was definently a “oohhhh” moment.
MC: “Oh a cute fox, what could possibly go wrong?”

Which quickly changed to: “I came out to have a good time and I’m honestly feeling so attacked right now”

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I just discovered this WIP, and it’s wonderful work! I can’t wait for more.

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Thank you! That’s very sweet of you :blush: I’m planning on updating in a week or two with the first half of part 2. I have to finish up some school stuff, however, so it might take longer.

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Take your time Iris, you are doing a great job.

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Ohh. Nearly forget about Freaky Baby. lol

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Not sure if you knew but the ages of the 3 kids gets messed up when i turned 6 they said morgan did 1.5 years before me so now that im 7 hes 14 i should be at least 12

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