Bloodbound


#1

(Not entirely sure if this will work)
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/dfabulich-choicescript-23e5605/web/mygame/index.html?w=54b182c9

–will do much editing later on. Its pretty late here atm so some of it may sound a little weird:p

Call me absolutely evil for starting a new CoG when I haven’t finished the last one (or gone anywhere relatively far in it), but this idea was just too much for me to pass on it! :C
I’m not promising anything this time, but I feel as though Vampires > Zombies just a little bit, at least, and I just wanted to add to the vampfandom.

I’m new to dropbox and it befuddles me because it wont take any of my .zip files, but I tried to mess with it, and here is the final result! Cx

Story outline (I promise it is more interesting than the other one you may have seen :stuck_out_tongue: I wanted to do a cliche historical fiction with that one…)
You, as you may have earlier guessed, play as a vampire in this game! Your family of vampire hunters are killed one day, after your father gets into some trouble with a clan of some really hardcore vampires. You and your family try to get away, but no! Oh no, you are turned into a vampire and welcomed into a clan(different vampires).
You can decide whether to:

  1. Follow in your parents footsteps and slay your (now) own kind
  2. Rise to the top of the vampires and become their new King/Queen/Leader
  3. Seek revenge on those jerks that killed your family
    or choose your own path whatever that may be. (As you can see, I am still working on this D8)

I am posting this early on because I have taken advice, and posted my first little seedlings of ideas out into the world to be judged and so, if there is anything I can do to make it better, I can change it without much hassle.

Enjoy! :smiley: Remember, I love criticism. If you have any comments/questions, please tell. That would be fabulous I also love flames. Thank you! C’:


#2

my suspiscions were correct this is quite badass


#3

I like it.
It’s pretty cool so far :slight_smile:


#4

I’m not being allowed access to the game when I click the link.


#5

Neither am I, comes up with a 403 error


#6

error 403, seems fun though


#7

The game needs to be inside the public folder of dropbox and you need to provide us with the “public” link


#8

Try doing this:

  1. Place your “web” folder in the “Dropbox/Public” folder.
  2. Go in your “web” folder inside the “Dropbox/Public” folder
  3. Right-click the “index.html” file, go to the “Dropbox” menu and click “Copy public link”
  4. Paste the link here.

This way, we’ll just playtest the game online.


#9

Ok! I will do that! :smiley: thank you all so much! :slight_smile: it seems that my last comment didnt post but I am on my phone at the moment, so I must do it tomorrow after school ':c
Thank you all for trying though, and I’m terribly sorry about the delay! :frowning:


#10

dont worry about it. however I will be driving tomorrow to see a girl who I love very much, so idk when I will play it.


#11

^TMI


#12

the game sounds badass


#13

I’m a sucker for romance and I would like to know if there will be any. ^.^


#14

the demo don’t work or more correctly has an error when you click the link :-?


#15

403 error i dont belong :S


#16

I am so overdue on this :’) Oh dear.
Before anybody says anything… I have my excuses… <.< >.> The first day… I… Went… Surfing… Then… I was hungry. Then I had school. ':a

http://gossamerthreads.webs.com/Bloodbound/web/mygame/index.html

Here is the link.
Dropbox is not for me XD
I overwrote my last CoG, but I saved the data elsewhere C; (if you can call it that)
So you may notice that I haven’t changed the Stats page from Freydale XD I will do that later.

Enjoy/pretend :smiley: <3


#17

@817819, I can’t help being naturally badass :confused: its how I roll, bro. (kidding) c; thanks!

@DonkeyKong, I also love romance! :smiley: and I would love to put romance in it, but we’ll have to see because I’m not exactly the greatest writer ever, so I will try and Try to (not) make it soppy/bearable/painful (delete as appropriate) c:

@djma46 @ice hopefully the new link will be okay! :smiley: any problems, just say! C:

@Antitorpiliko, aww hope that went well for you :slight_smile: and read it anytime! XD no rush :stuck_out_tongue:


#18

I had no trouble with the new link :slight_smile: I thought what you have so far is very good. I liked how it transitioned from “oh everything is happy and we are singing” to “oh no! Run!” in about a second. Really worked well to draw me in. I find myself wanting to know what happens to my character and his little sister.

There were one or two sentences that I found confusing, but I could have just misread them. I will go back through and see if I spot them again.

I wonder, if our parents survive and we turn into a vampire…will they hunt us? That would prove an excellent conflict. Anyway, good job!


#19

I like what I have read so far.

Just a note on the stat screen, it is not showing the player’s name or gender…

Leep up the excellent work XD


#20

It did not end well for me. Liked the beta! Want to become a vampire though, they are better then humans