–will do much editing later on. Its pretty late here atm so some of it may sound a little weird:p
Call me absolutely evil for starting a new CoG when I haven’t finished the last one (or gone anywhere relatively far in it), but this idea was just too much for me to pass on it! :C
I’m not promising anything this time, but I feel as though Vampires > Zombies just a little bit, at least, and I just wanted to add to the vampfandom.
I’m new to dropbox and it befuddles me because it wont take any of my .zip files, but I tried to mess with it, and here is the final result! Cx
Story outline (I promise it is more interesting than the other one you may have seen I wanted to do a cliche historical fiction with that one…)
You, as you may have earlier guessed, play as a vampire in this game! Your family of vampire hunters are killed one day, after your father gets into some trouble with a clan of some really hardcore vampires. You and your family try to get away, but no! Oh no, you are turned into a vampire and welcomed into a clan(different vampires).
You can decide whether to:
Follow in your parents footsteps and slay your (now) own kind
Rise to the top of the vampires and become their new King/Queen/Leader
Seek revenge on those jerks that killed your family
or choose your own path whatever that may be. (As you can see, I am still working on this D8)
I am posting this early on because I have taken advice, and posted my first little seedlings of ideas out into the world to be judged and so, if there is anything I can do to make it better, I can change it without much hassle.
Enjoy! Remember, I love criticism. If you have any comments/questions, please tell. That would be fabulous I also love flames. Thank you! C’:
Ok! I will do that! thank you all so much! it seems that my last comment didnt post but I am on my phone at the moment, so I must do it tomorrow after school ':c
Thank you all for trying though, and I’m terribly sorry about the delay!
I am so overdue on this :’) Oh dear.
Before anybody says anything… I have my excuses… <.< >.> The first day… I… Went… Surfing… Then… I was hungry. Then I had school. ':a
Here is the link.
Dropbox is not for me XD
I overwrote my last CoG, but I saved the data elsewhere C; (if you can call it that)
So you may notice that I haven’t changed the Stats page from Freydale XD I will do that later.
@817819, I can’t help being naturally badass its how I roll, bro. (kidding) c; thanks!
@DonkeyKong, I also love romance! and I would love to put romance in it, but we’ll have to see because I’m not exactly the greatest writer ever, so I will try and Try to (not) make it soppy/bearable/painful (delete as appropriate) c:
@djma46@ice hopefully the new link will be okay! any problems, just say! C:
@Antitorpiliko, aww hope that went well for you and read it anytime! XD no rush
I had no trouble with the new link I thought what you have so far is very good. I liked how it transitioned from “oh everything is happy and we are singing” to “oh no! Run!” in about a second. Really worked well to draw me in. I find myself wanting to know what happens to my character and his little sister.
There were one or two sentences that I found confusing, but I could have just misread them. I will go back through and see if I spot them again.
I wonder, if our parents survive and we turn into a vampire…will they hunt us? That would prove an excellent conflict. Anyway, good job!
I wanted to do a cliche historical fiction with that one…)
Remember, I love criticism. If you have any comments/questions, please tell. That would be fabulous I also love flames. Thank you! C’:
its how I roll, bro. (kidding) c; thanks!