Sign me up for testing. Twice.
Oh man. Really excited for this; Came back after IRL stuff and this isnt dead which is great. I really enjoyed the demo, Iād be up for beta testing if you allow it.
I would like to signed the fuck up for beta testing
I would like to beta test the game for you
I would like to beta test if itās possible, this game looks awesome.
Ahemā¦beta. Plus twenty fucks.
I would like to beta test
Iād love to beta test as well, Ive read through the demo multiple times and checked back after every update for what itās worth. I also have a fair amount of free time coming up so I should be able to give feedback relatively quickly.
I would like to as well
I would love to beta test this! This has easily been in my top 3 WIPs, and Iām so excited to see it being this close to finished, I would be honored if you picked me for this grand venture!
I would love to beta test this as well!!
āEssentially copyediting via sending me quotes and screenshots instead of rewriting it yourself.ā
Oops, I feel like Iāve been guilty of this. =^P
Anyways, itās nice to see this project moving along towards completion. Iād volunteer myself, since thereās a lot I say regarding the narrative, but I also feel that my feedback would be taken as contrarian or conflictive, so you probably might not want me in the first place. =^P
Gotta appreciate the extent of the power-customization options though ā definitely the gameās strongest point imo, and probably the largest challenge in incorporating into all the necessary scenes and details.
I would love to volunteer to beta test as well!
This is an overwhelming flood of replies and volunteers. As stated above, I will contact those chosen for testing on the 5th with further information. I will be trying to glance through as many peoplesā previous posts to see what kind of feedback has been offered to other WiPs and trying to determine who would make a good fit. Itās also nice to see a few Lords of Aswick testers volunteering.
If you have not received a private message from me by the 7th at the latest, you have not been chosen for one reason or another. There will probably be a major culling due to the sheer number of volunteers.
@Fiogan Absolutely understandable. It is very much appreciated that youāre willing to volunteer some of your time for some less intensive testing nonetheless. Who knows, maybe Iāll hire you on for the next one.
@forWantOf Thereās no benefit to me from having just yes-men reading my stuff. The negative reviews for Lords of Aswick helped me identify a lot of issues I had in my writing, which helped me be concious about them when writing Best of Usā¦
Well, I suppose I get late to the beta party but if you want my feedback you could add me later on. I am not good fishing grammatical errors because I am not native. But I love nip pick and criticize and give crazy ideas about weird things.
Small language errors are easiest to spot, thus more people are likely to look out for those. I think it would be good to have someone like you testing out a story.
I would love to help beta test if it isnāt too late
Debating these things always make for a better story overall so, no worries.
If you wish to make it clearer that the sentence refers to Aurora, perhaps this alternative might suffice: āā¦is British. Why donāt you fly them both out of here too? Youād solve a lot of their troubles then, wouldnāt you?ā
As to the point of shifting out of doorways, āShiftingā rather means, to me, āmoving slightlyā, āfidgetingā, or moving in a sidewards motion like the sneaking thing you see in cartoons. What exactly is Caracal supposed to be doing? Another word may be more appropriate?
I would like to volunteer for BETA TESTING as well if it isnāt too late. Iām quite good at nitpicking minor-medium grammar errors, punctuation, and awkward sentence structure. Detecting comma splices, run-ons, and dangling modifiers may escape my radar, however. lol
I am much better at characterization and idea generation than nitpicking though, so if you still need betas, Iād like to help.
I would love to beta test this if possible.