Summary: The governments of Esten and Lahar have suddenly ended their centuries long war against each other, but the reasons why remain elusive. The citizens of both nations are forbidden to inquire about the reasons surrounding the armistice, and the tensions in the continent of Aether remain thick and heavy. You are born in Furze, the second largest metropolis in Lahar. Your parents discovered you are a gifted spellcrafter, and decided that enrolling you at The Spell Academy is a good idea. The bad news is, you’re still too young to attend The Spell Academy! For the moment, you’re enrolled at Kaelich’s School, a humble magic school for young spellcrafters.
Chapter 1-5, https://dashingdon.com/go/1750
Play as male, female, or nonbinary.
Straight, gay, and bisexual romances.
In-depth character stats
Unique ally system that allows you to summon special allies.
Feedback: In particular, I’m looking for plot-related issues (Is the pace too fast? Is something missing from the plot?), as well as grammar issues (spelling errors, wrong pronouns/ word usage).
Chapter 1 uploaded (8/19)
Some pronoun issues with school friend was fixed (8/19)
Extra scene added to introduce your character to school friend (8/20)
A second opportunity to learn dark magic has been opened, even if you didn’t choose darkness in the beginning (8/20)
Chapter 2 uploaded (8/23), First romance introduced.
Accolades, allies, and new titles added (8/23)
Additional encounter with parents added to the beginning of Chapter 2, as well as a field trip to a landmark in Furze (8/25)
Grammar and spelling errors fixed from chapter 2, Explanation regarding demon attack and an interview for the MC has been added (8/27)
Minor grammar errors fixed. Sentence revisions for chapter 2 (8/29)
Grammar fixes and pronouns regarding MC were tweaked. Non-binary gender pronouns have been changed for accuracy. (9/4)
Ch.3 uploaded. Featuring a brand new character that is romeance-able. Explore The Market District in search of an expensive ingredient. (9/6)
Minor grammar issues and strange wording in Ch.3 fixed. (9/7)
Description of Esten and Lahar have been added to Ch.1. Images illustrating their societies have also been added. (9/16)
Detailed descriptions, specifically regarding Furze and Laharian technology and daily appliances, added to Ch.1, 2, and 3. Clothing descriptions, worn by school friends, added to Ch. 1. (9/17)
Erika and Alana’s story have been greatly modified. Jericho and Aron’s story were given slight revisions. Grammar errors and spelling mistakes in Ch. 1 and 3 fixed. (9/24)
Headmaster Kaelich has been renamed as Headmaster Kane. This was done to prevent confusion regarding the school’s name and the headmaster himself (9/24)
Ch.2 bug regarding Alana fixed (9/25)
Minor revisions made to Ray and Aron’s story. (10/1)
Ch. 4 Uploaded! Help Morgana create the promethean. Discover the truth behind Morgana’s past (10/1)
Ch.1,2, and 4 grammar issues fixed. Ch.1 interaction with friend, during Practical Magic class, has been revised. (10/2)
Ch. 4 ending revised. Branching path for suspecting the anonymous texts has been added (10/3)
Chapter 5 uploaded. Finish the fight against the mysterious masked figure (12/22)
Chapter 1 and 5 error fixed (12/23)
Chapter 5 error regarding the dark promethean has been fixed (12/25)
Ch. 1 rewrite complete. Ch. 2 clarifications have been added. Rewrite of Aron in Ch.1 and 2 (1/1)
Bug and grammar errors fixes for Ch.1 and Ch.2 (1/8)
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