Abysm's Veil- Continuing the story. (WIP) Last update 11th August

Ugh the chapter beginning with Terrell’s ship gave me absolute dread… If anyone tries to mess with him I’m throwing hands (ง •̀_•́)ง that’s my human you fishy bitches!!!

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@Jacic
In part10boat2.
The choice:

Sing your own counterpoint to amplify the effects of the song as you’d planned."

Needs the double quote removed.

Sing your own counterpoint to amplify the effects of the song. Might as well try to show Leiko up considering the hunt isn’t going quite as planned."

This choice needs the double quote removed.

it’s a face you recognise. Jared. There’s no doubt in your mind that this is Alexia’s brother, the girl whose memories you saw on the night of the attack on the Cormorant. With a start, you realise he was right all along. For once in his life he was telling the truth and didn’t deserve to die. This man set him up.

This paragraph is confusing me. Who is Alexia brother? Jared? Is Jared the man Tanya is singing to?

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Holy cow that update was awesome!! :slight_smile: Only sad part is now I’m scared for Terrell :fearful:. Can’t wait to see whats next keep up the good work.

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Thank you again @Bugreporter!
Yep you’re right, I’ll do a reword on that last paragraph. It’s meant to be a memory flashback seeing things through the eyes of the man Tanya is singing to but it’s not phrased very clearly.

Thanks @Gamer4 :smile:

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I’m not sure if it’s a bug but is the “outsider” achievement about talking to Charlotte about your concerns? If so the achievement doesn’t activate when I decide too.

Hi @Gamer4. Sorry I can’t quite remember what I did with that achievement :confounded: I’ll need to check for you. May take me a few days as my laptop died to I need to get the files across. Will let you know when I have a chance to look at it.

Edit: Actually on second thoughts I think you’re right. I’ll need to see why the achievement isn’t triggering. Thanks for the bug report.

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