There’s a space between the asterisk, and the S of the saves line. It won’t hurt anything, but it does make creating save states inaccessible for the moment. 
A Warmth in the cold, volume1, new content uploaded, stat_chart now up, please post any issues found
Thanks. I honestly don’t know much about saving, although I’m thinking I’m not going to implement it right now just because there aren’t as many choices, although probably after next update simply because at that point there’s going to be more choices that you can pick, thus more branches.
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@ArchivistAlpha096 im still intrigued and looking forward to seeing more of the world creating ive found it seems to be harder to get inmersed now than before mainly because a lack of names so its more confusing to follow peoples conversations.
Also noticed a couple times there was numbers here and there thatvseemed possibly off? Kinda hard to exsplain lol at least in the moment.
Going through the playthrough though i didnt see any game breaking bugs so good job on that front. 
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What do you mean by, no names? I will take a look, but I thought that I identified who each member of the team is?
Pretty much all of it at least from the link i played from there were a few mentions of names but the vast majority of the conversation/'s had no point of reference that was clear as to whom was speaking to whom at least to me.
Exspecially after we get to the new place after being taken from are room where we start off at.
Point in refence it seems like there is if i recall correctly four maybe five people in our room… then seemingly we get dropped into the new place with four more people whom are the ROs you have but barely a mention of name to anyone and defintly not in a way that would say who is who it looks and feel as if those indicators should exist but simply dont.
Hope that helps but its kinda hard to explain because its so rampant when in the new place.
I will take a look, could just be that because I wrote the book, and thus know who everyone is and their speach patterns and such, I overlooked that.
I am trying to make it so you can tell who is speaking by their speach patterns, but if people are running into the issue that they don’t know who is speaking, then I won’t bother.
On the subject of the MC’s room, where the story starts, however, the people in there are not really named, as they won’t become important till later, but I can make it a bit more explicit on who is talking to whom, if that makes it easier for the players.
Although, if you are talking about the MC-s perspective, after he shows up in the new place, to when he falls unconscious, then there is a reason for the lack of names. If it’s after that, will see if I can clear it up a little.
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I just played the demo, and it’s really cool! I have just a few suggestions. Firstly, I recommend you use Grammarly. It’s free, and it’ll really help you with spelling, word choice and grammar. Second, it’s a little hard to tell who’s saying what. It got better towards the end, but I think you should try make it a little more clear. Finally, I think a small amount of character descriptions would be good. You don’t have to go crazy, just hair color, eye color, and skin tone.
Oh, and the save system doesn’t work. Unfortunately, I can’t really help with that
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Thank you for the suggestions.
I have been told that I should use Grammarly multiple times, unfortunately it’s not really accessible at all, unfortunately.
I am working on making it clear as to who is saying what and two who as we speak.
I have descriptions, the reason they are not currently described, is that one, The watcher of herself is not the MC, and two, I would like to do the descriptions from the MCS perspective. There is another reason as well, but that particular one is a Ted spoiler free as of now.
The way that it is looking now, the descriptions of the unit members will be in the next update, which should be somewhere around either late this weekend, to mid next week.
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New content has been added. Also, the save system should work now (I checked).
I was going to keep going, but decided to stop where I did so I could get some feedback before I actually went into the full team interactions with the MC.
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I will have a look at the safe system and see what’s up. Although, would you please be able to actually write what the error is instead of showing an image, as my screen reader doesn’t really do images very well. It literally just says image for the most part.
The error says:
candle line 641: Non-existent variable ‘wat_first’
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That error is fixed now.
Please do not click the choices with a WIP, in front of them, as I am still in the process of fixing them, as my temp variables seem to be acting up.
Also, the save system is currently a WIP as well, so apologies for that.
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Please note that new content has been added, I hope that you enjoy.
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Hello l loved the demo when you first post it, the demo needed some proofreading back then.
But now there’s error when I choose the first choice both of them not working the error say
candle line 75: Non-existent variable ‘easy’
the save not working too.
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Should be fixed now, thanks. Always the little things you only notice at the end, isn’t it?
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Now There’s this error at the start
startup line 39: Invalid create instruction, only allowed at the top of startup.txt
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Fixed.
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Hi, I apologize for the inconvenience. When I tried to select one of the four characters the player encounters, an error occurred and I couldn’t continue. I would like to mention that the game did not allow me to continue regardless of the character I chose. I tried several times to restart the game, but I encountered the same problem. The error was:
Our apologies, there was a 404 error while loading game data. Please refresh your browser now; if that doesn’t work, please email support- external@choiceofgames.com with details.
Thank you for your understanding.
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Fixed.
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