Yep, since there was a lot of negative criticism decided to start completely from scratch. Also I update quite sporadically, so decided to just put in the title which chapter lines are up. So there may be a new version up without a title change, all be it a small one.
Ok I think this is in the right category. I say that as I have literally just learnt how to code(and only learnt the basics at that)so if this would be better suited to another category feel free to move it . However I’ve wanted to have a go writing a game for a while, so had a few ideas already. Not sure where I want to go with this, this story is as much about learning how to code as it is writing a story, however if I ever do write a full game it’ll be heavily inspired by something like this if it is significantly different.
It’s early days so not really wanting feedback with regards to adding more complex mechanics and. Looking more for stuff like “yes I like the theme/your writing/no I don’t” “there’s not enough character detail/too much” Or if you have any coding tips and whatnot that would also be much appreciated (though I am a slow learner with regards to computer stuff )
Anyway my yp is about a young woman(or non-binary or man though the set proganist was written as a woman really) who runs away from home after your dad is abusive towards you on your birthday. You then meet your friend Emma and in the future you’ll go on many adventures…maybe . I also thought about setting it in an asylum…I might add it happening before the current start or at the end. Anyway the link is below, see what you think, but it is a very rough draft.
Note: My story deals with many dark, adult and harsh themes like parental abuse, references to drugs, drug and alcohol abuse,violence, mental health issues, mention of suicide, sexual harassment?, self harm-cutting, nudity sexual assault and a somewhat detailed description of it.
Read the list above carefully, be sure to recheck it regularly(though I will post if I do a significant update) as that list is subject to change. Ifyou think any of those themes may trigger you don’t click the link. (adult only).
this is a rough draft so I wont announce small changes to the game…only big ones, so if the link you used last time didn’t work check the first post…chances are I changed the link(still getting used to dashingdon’s site too :p)