This is a project I’ve been outlining and working on for about six months. I have a small demo currently, just the prologue which is about four thousand words at the moment, so this is basically an interest check for me to decide whether or not to turn this idea into a set of novels or to turn it into a CYOA.
The Premise (Without Spoilers)
When you stumble upon a mysterious necklace you find yourself thrust into a world of Godly politics and a struggle for survival. Will you choose to aid your new Godly Patron in discovering why the Gods are dying? Or will you side with those responsible for their deaths? And through it all can you keep yourself, your younger brother, and all those you care for safe?
The Premise (With Spoilers)
You take on the role of a twenty year old college student living in Chicago taking care of your younger brother for the summer while your parents finalize their divorce. After exploring an antique shop you acquire a necklace that was created in desperation when the Gods began dying and no cause could be found. The necklace assigns you a patron God or Goddess from six pantheons. There are seven love interests for the seven pantheons that are the main focus of the story, though you will only be able to be assigned a patron from one of six of the pantheons. This is a more character and intrigue driven story with an MC that has a customizable personality.
What I’m Looking For
Like I mentioned, this is basically an interest check for the moment to know whether or not anybody would be interested in reading a CYOA based on the premise and what I have written in the prologue. After that just general criticism that you’d give any other project on here; spelling, grammar, pacing, how the characters feel, your favorite and least favorite things about the demo so far, and things like that.
List of Changes (10/10)
Stats Screen changes
New Memory in Prologue
Tweaks to Stats
So, here’s the demo:
Thank you for reading this and checking out my project!
Edit: Link for the official tumblr: