this is just a idea that i have been throwing around for a while and thought i would try it
this is a basic description of what i want to try to do but i will Probably need grammar help from you guys
You are prince of the nation of xotrain, A nation renowned for its stout heavy infantry and longbowman. The nation of xotrain has been at war on and off for several decades with the nation of trosal, A nation renowned for its heavy cavalry. Both nations used to be one nation but because of cultural differences half the land was given to your grandfather while the other half was given to your great uncle. Conflict was started because each kingdom claims the right to the other half of the kingdom. Will you help your nation to greatness or will xotrain be forgotten in history.
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What are some of the cultural differences, and how did they develop?
Figuring that out may help you write your story.
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I think it’s a good beginning to a skeleton. All you gotta do is add more bones and then beef it up a bit. If you need help I’m always willing, as my imagination never shuts up.
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thank you.i will have to do some background such as some maps and a biography of both nations and some background infomation once i get the beginning done i will Probably be spending 3-4 hours a day on this
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Good luck with it! 
I am not sure if i am going to go indepth to much with romance is that very important to you guys if i do or dont