So… I really liked the concept of the dog thingy (after playing Choice of the Cat, I knew this kind of Choice game won’t disappoint) but one thing I can’t get past is the formatting. If you’re going to write long paragraphs of text, I suggest you use *page_break because it gets kinda irritating having to read long texts. Break it up if it’s long. Also, you could use double *line_break to separate paragraphs. Leave at least one line empty before you start with the next paragraph so it doesn’t look too crowded. Will continue testing this if I can manage to ignore formatting issues I have here.
Good luck with this though, it looks promising.