Your story : One of Many

Fixed it. (Link had been changed so I just needed to change it a bit.)

I intervened because I figured she’d do something violent. I scared him off with an illusion.

The game sounds great so far, I’ll be keeping an eye on it. ^^

I like it. Will you eventually add different reactions for NPCs depending on the characters race? These Shadowborn and Relics seem like things that could start up a few gasps or bouts of disgust

Yes I do plan to have people react differently to the characters race.
Also relics will get a good bit less hate than ancients and shadowborn and shadowborn get somewhat less hate than ancients.
But that doesn’t mean relics won’t have to deal with hate.

Alright cool man. It’d make sense that the Ancients would recieve more hate, seeing as how they enslaved the Humans and Relics and all that jazz.

Hello, found an error if you choose the option “Not even, I could run circles around you!” after your sister asks if your tired.
Error is:
ch_1 line 21:increasing indent not allowed, expected 2 was 4

apart from that, i like it, the pace is fast, liked there is some lore with race selections not just what they are good at. all seems good, waiting for more.