A certain someone advised me to post my staff here.
A portion of a my Wip (traditional writing).
Genre: Superheroes - soft cyberpunk.
Setting: Near future real world unless stated differently.
Warning it contains abuse and strong language
Lost Secrets
I used Microsoft Word translator with some hand corrections, so if you think my writing style is a bit weird, I partly blame the translator and language differences.
What I ask:
- What can you understand of the story based on this part alone?
- Which are your over all impressions?
- What do you think about the three characters? the scanner guard is just a nameless extra, ignore him
EDIT: erased the link. I got what I wanted