No worries at all, and no need to apologise.
The posting of excerpts on this thread tends to be more “show and tell” rather than for formal feedback. I would gently disagree that most authors participate in it. It’s very much an informal thing.
In general feedback tends to be related to specific projects (because of the nature of the forum, which mostly focuses on feedback for games intended for publication, and discussion of published games). Mara created a general workshop thread here a little while back for small games or writing not intended for publication, which may be of interest: