WIP: The Song of Exile (PUBLIC BETA - 13/10/2022)

You are back :blush:

I’ll take a look at it!

Update 13/10/2022:

  • Incorrect pronouns and name re: love interest’s gender corrected
  • Glitch with the f/f wedding in ch9 corrected
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Sorry to bother you, but I keep getting this error

chapter6 line 598: It is illegal to fall in to an *else statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.

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I’ll look into it!

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I think I fixed it!

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Another lovely game into the books, thank you for the hard work~

The only thing that distracts me is the way the game portrays the people speaking, I’ve been conditioned to think that the single quotation marks are used to refer to the inner thoughts of the speaker, regardless it’s an amazing work and I can’t wait for more.

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YO was sup, I am sorry to disappoint u but this was the last time the comment above yours which is the author’s ever chatted in the forum again but hopefully they will return to create more wonderful wips but u can still invite newcomers to check this forum out or those that get interested in wips and wanna try it out @Edie_Dreyer

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I feared that, besides the typos and switching of the Lady’s pronouns, it was an excellent game, though I was miffed, didn’t expect her to actuallybloody go through with the proposal for the fcking marriage…thought she would just cancel it, but well noble customs and the heck, so I had to be dastardly… Still, it is finished with endings so others could try it out.

Thanks matey.

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If u want u can actually marry the boss, so far that is only ro I know but they might be more I am not sure, I didn’t pursue any love interest when I figured why we were exiled

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Yeah… when I saw what we did…I kinda wanted us to repent for all eternity, but…the heart wants what the heart wants, you can marry her, picked that option, but you have to ehem…subtly sabotage the negotiations for the marriage, and she confesses she didn’t want anyone else but you kinda makes me feel like a douche though, I mean…I lied… aiyah. Still, worth the play.

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Bruh if u slowly look at the sentence in the story u will understand that what she needed was love of any kind along with the return of her nobility status

and if you played through the end, she admits that she didn’t want it, or rather didn’t want that anymore as long as she was happy. Bittersweet, that we couldn’t give her both status and happiness, but heck, hopefully the children would.

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Wait what we could have children with her, ok I gotta make another playthrough

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Implied in the ending matey, do enjoy.

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Huh, yeah that was expected i just completed the negotiations and switching sides because she looks so passive and the mc need to keep pursuing her which annoys me and just want to be done with it :moyai:

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Aye, I just wished that when you were gonna go to the negotiations, she kinda hinted that she DIDN’T want you to do it, not AFTER, God bloody damn it. Left a bitter after taste, yet, still chose her, by ruining it.

Hey, guys! Applications to private beta are available here: PRIVATE BETA - Song of Exile

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This seems like a great story so far.

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Wooooooh! I can’t wait for more :3