WIP: The Song of Exile (PUBLIC BETA - 13/10/2022)

[DearestAnnabel]

Thank you; fixed it!

[QShiina]

(Sorry couldnt post with screenshot because it wouldnt let me. Also I’m not sure if need to censor for spoiler but pls let me know if I need to and how;; )

I ran into this after getting banished from failing the marriage…
chapter9 line 1097: invalid expression at char 48, expected no more tokens, found: NAMED_OPERATOR [and]

Btw is it possible to get an happier ending with E without arranging the marriage ? Idk if it’s because my relationship bar was so low or something but the ending with marriage made me so disappointed and this ending (failing marriage arrangement) doesn’t seem to be good either… it doesnt feel like E has any interest in my mc in my play through T_T

[DearestAnnabel]

I’ve tried to alter the code; can you check if it’s working again?

There is a rather traditional happy ending if you sabotage the negotiations or simply fail them and have a high relationship stat with E at the same time.

[QShiina]

I still cant progress;;

And I see, I’m gonna replay the game again and aim for higher relationship^^

[DearestAnnabel]

Added a couple of brackets to the variables string - perhaps, that might help

[DearestAnnabel]

I am restarting my work on this project! I know it’s been a long time, but - I changed the code a little, can you check if it’s working now?

[Schliemannsghost]

Oooh, I’m very happy to see this story come back! I liked it a lot, and I was starting to fear that it had been abandoned, which would have been such a shame.

[Fenrir1]

The gender of the lords keeps changing i choose it to be female but it changes to male.

[jay-walker]

You are back

[DearestAnnabel]

I’ll take a look at it!

[DearestAnnabel]

Update 13/10/2022:

• Incorrect pronouns and name re: love interest’s gender corrected
• Glitch with the f/f wedding in ch9 corrected

[Daisuke_Baka]

Sorry to bother you, but I keep getting this error

chapter6 line 598: It is illegal to fall in to an *else statement; you must *goto or *finish before the end of the indented block.

[DearestAnnabel]

I’ll look into it!

[DearestAnnabel]

I think I fixed it!

[Edie_Dreyer]

Another lovely game into the books, thank you for the hard work~

The only thing that distracts me is the way the game portrays the people speaking, I’ve been conditioned to think that the single quotation marks are used to refer to the inner thoughts of the speaker, regardless it’s an amazing work and I can’t wait for more.

[Elemental]

YO was sup, I am sorry to disappoint u but this was the last time the comment above yours which is the author’s ever chatted in the forum again but hopefully they will return to create more wonderful wips but u can still invite newcomers to check this forum out or those that get interested in wips and wanna try it out @Edie_Dreyer

[Edie_Dreyer]

I feared that, besides the typos and switching of the Lady’s pronouns, it was an excellent game, though I was miffed, didn’t expect her to actuallybloody go through with the proposal for the fcking marriage…thought she would just cancel it, but well noble customs and the heck, so I had to be dastardly… Still, it is finished with endings so others could try it out.

Thanks matey.

[Elemental]

If u want u can actually marry the boss, so far that is only ro I know but they might be more I am not sure, I didn’t pursue any love interest when I figured why we were exiled