Thanks so much for the kind words—and for spotting that!
You’re absolutely right that there’s a loop in the dressing section. That’s intentional (for now!), because in order to move forward with the story, you need to have at least a shirt, pants, and shoes equipped. If any of those are missing, the game nudges you back into the wardrobe.
That said, the redirection to hats instead of the menu might be a bug—I’ll double-check the labels to make sure it’s looping correctly. Really appreciate you flagging that!
And yeah, I totally agree about the worldbuilding bit. I’m planning to spread it out more naturally as the story goes on, so it’s not all frontloaded.
Thanks again for playing and for the thoughtful feedback—it really helps!
I’m really pleading with you to finish this incredible masterpiece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it; the choices you presented were so thoughtfully crafted and engaging. I can hardly wait to dive into the completed version once you’ve wrapped it up. I genuinely hope you find success as you continue to work on it, because it truly deserves to be shared with others.
Wow, thank you so much for this—seriously. Your words mean the world to me, and hearing that you enjoyed the choices and story just fuels me to keep going. I’m so glad it resonated with you, and I’m doing my best to make sure the finished version lives up to that. Thank you for the support—it really, really helps!
Lol the wardrobe is like “Get over here” if u try to leave without customizing the MC clothes. I think the leader of the gang who’s attention we caught is going a little far plotting our demise with that delish plan of theirs to slowly make us go insane before eventually ending it. Why not just send a some to thugs to do us away before vamping up things that far. We’re barely on the radar for now. Are they going to be an Ro since you can select their gender
Well the MC can fight an army of goons in the alley maybe we have a chance even if our skills are a little rusty from running from the past. Right now I want to get the rat that ditched us on the job. No one can stay hidden in the chaotic city for long. That leader of the gang is smart and calculating leaving nothing unchecked even a nuisance like MC is for now for being part of it
Update Released!
Chapter 1 is now live, and a few bugs from the demo have been fixed.
Thanks for the support—feel free to share your feedback or report any issues you spot!
I can’t progress as i get this error. I reloaded and tried both options, same error.
It was after the choice where you are asked in the dream ehat you want to do after the war, mission, forgot which, and after the choice of how you react to it.
Really impressive first game. Really like the demo so far. I do feel like it gets slowed down a bit with all customisation about what to wear and how to look.
It’s great thta there is a lot of options, but it’d be nice to have a “defualt” options for those of us that just want to jump into the story.
“Hmm. This is fascinating, in its own way. It doesn’t conform to any of the usual parameters, yet it operates within its own logic. The structure… unusual, almost chaotic. But there’s method in the madness. I’ll need more time to fully understand what I’m looking at, but I suspect this holds more potential than it first appears. There’s something intriguing about it.”
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-after you press the boots option in the second dress up
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“What do you want? This is getting ridiculous. I don’t have time for this nonsense, so can we please just get to the point already?”
“Let’s talk. You can either keep going down this road, or we can settle this without any more drama. Your choice, but make it quick.” “What do you want from me? I’ve been patient enough, but I’m done playing games. You’re not getting any more of my time unless you stop dancing around it and tell me exactly what you want.”
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-Don’t cry. You’re strong. You’ve been strong long enough to know that showing weakness won’t change anything. It’s a lie you tell yourself, a lie you keep repeating like a broken mantra. But inside, the walls are cracking, and maybe you’re not as strong as you’ve convinced yourself to be. Maybe, just maybe, the strength you’ve been holding onto has been wearing thin all along.
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-You bathe in blood, not by accident or fate, but by choice. It clings to your skin like a second layer, seeps into your scars like it’s always belonged there. You’re not just stained by violence—you wear it, breathe it, walk in it. Where others flinch, you find purpose. Where they see ruin, you see ritual. The battlefield is your sanctuary, and blood is the price of clarity.
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-You resist the violence, not because you lack the strength to unleash it, but because you know exactly what it costs. It whispers to you in every heartbeat, coils beneath your skin like a sleeping beast, begging to be set loose. But you hold the line. Not out of mercy—out of will. Because power without restraint is just ruin wearing a crown. And you’ve seen enough ruin to last a lifetime.
The update was epic. Slow build up from the convoy to eventually hunting down the general working on some secret projects in the facility. The build up was worth it especially after finding out more about their twisted plan about MC and more shockingly their past being brought up. That cut deep in the final confrontation after he was done running. There was no mercy after that. The general is just a small piece of a larger scheme. That fight sent shockwaves through the city and some people are already questions about the organization. The illustration they made is starting to fade away. No doubt the guy who organized the order is gonna start making moves soon. The gang leaders plan is already screwing with us quite a bit but seriously they should probably avoid dark alleys with how banana shaped things go for their men
The general really feared the scapegoat could come back crashing thanks to chat on the voice files that were almost erased completely. My favorite new skill the engineering skill. It’s so satisfying watching the MC pick apart their perfect machines that were thought to safe from hacks and bug free. You did the powers awakening justice near the end especially with the training dummy at the end showcasing how powerful the Variants can be.
I do feel like it gets slowed down a bit with all customisation about what to wear and how to look.