[WIP] Nature of Meta: Genesis

Wow, i like what I have read so far, confused precognition character check.

OK I did notice something odd occasionally a rouge “2” appears, I feel this may refer to the MCs ankle, can’t specify where exactly but saw it a couple of times. Also can’t take a screenshot as I am a mobile.

Look forward to learning more about this world, bookmarking now.

Glad you like it so far! And thank you for the error, hopefully its all working now


Did anyone else catch this typo yet?

Unless it’s not a typo, which means this story is going weird places and I approve whole heartedly

Should be “a deafening crack” and that should be “then” not “than”

There’s a few spots where I think it’ll flow better that I’ll grab pics of too

These next couple are more of a personal opinion thing.

Works better as “I’m” than “I am” imo

“They’re”

“What’s”

I had a professor tell me that contractions and compound words are usually your friend when writing a character because people generally speak in contractions and compound words.

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