[WIP] Memoir of Smoke and Mirrors (Update 07/27/21)

@astraeius First of all, thank you so much!
And I’m amazed if that’s the case. I rarely post :tired_face: like, once a month :joy: but aaaah still, thank you! I’m really glad you’re interested in this! (And I love writing dramatic AF prose like that prologue and work from there)

Corbyn/Coryna shows love the only way he/she knows, emotionally constipated that he is :joy:

Some hopefully satisfying answers!

No need to be sorry! I love getting questions about lore, characters, and the likes. They’re really very helpful so ask away if ever you have more. I’ll never get tired of them and look forward to more.

One in 100,000 sounds about right, actually. Not everyone gets to meet an Archon in their lifetime, in fact. Most of them gets recruited by the Guild (if they don’t start as an ordinary human agent first, that is), and they’re unlikely to be deployed in sleepy little towns that don’t ever get criminal action like Rivercliff due to how limited they are.

A tangent (but provides a little more insight about Archon rarity if you’re interested, but I’m adding spoiler tags so it’s easier to skip if you’re not ^~^) Eidnyr is a huge continent (Can I start calling it a supercontinent? Is there a map coming soon? Perhaps) but Pantheons usually had large territories they governed/were in charge of, or were predominant in. There wasn’t much of them, compared to humans at that time before Deiomakhia—and especially compared to the modern day, as I’m sure modern life’s more advanced technology has increased lifespans and inflated the population. And not all the gods gave Relics, too. Like humans to gods, they had different opinions about humans, too. Not all of them were good. (But of course, there were also the spiteful gods who gave destructive Relics to wreak havoc to humans)

Yep! Depending on where they are and the culture in that place, treatment towards them varies. Like, in some places where there are more people who worship the gods than not, Archons are welcomed and even sometimes revered, due to their connection with gods through their Relics. On the other hand, in places where godhaters are rampant, they might be looked on with envy or disdain. However, both will treat them with some level of wariness.

Another yes. Archons and Heroes have different ways of getting their powers (one through Relics and the other through bloodlines) but both came from the gods themselves, so they’re not really all that different. Mostly, it depends on the Relic an Archon possesses, and dangerous Relics are handed over to the Guild for safekeeping, so high level Archons are few. I’d say it’s hard to be at the level of the most powerful Heroes, but not impossible.

If an Archon is given an opportunity to prove themself beyond their Relic’s rank, able to bring out their full potential despite the Relic’s limit, then yes. It’s definitely those who don’t solely rely on their Relics, too, the ones who use their wits or people skills, their natural physical strength or other specialties.

Harm is one aspect of it. Not all Relics cause harm (some grant healing abilities and such). It’s more of how influential a Relic is, their scope and limitations. It’s a rather tricky assumption especially if the wielder turns out to be crafty or smart, so Relic Ranks are judged based on how a normal person would wield them.

A Rank 1 Relic is considered as mostly harmless and barely influential, usually works on an individual alone (aside from its Archon, that is)
A Rank 2 Relic can affect maybe a couple of individuals or so, but not that much of a difference from Rank 1
A Rank 3 Relic can influence a small mob.

It goes up to Rank 10 and increases exponentially, until large-scale influence and/or destruction. The number of Relics is inversely proportional to the Ranks. Relating to the question earlier, Archons who go beyond or above their Relic ranks are called Catalonans, or Catalonic Archons.

Heroes are ranked on a similar system! For example, there are two sons of Zeus. One of them might manifest greater power than the other. Whereas son #1 can control storms, son #2 might only be able to zap people with low voltage pokes. Son #1 would be classified as Rank 7 or 8 while son #2 would be a 1.

Most Relics (and Heroic power) have this so-called principle of exchange. What does the Relic want in return for an Archon using its power? The answer depends on a Relic’s power. If it’s low ranked, it’s probably not much.

Purify it first—:joy:


I hope the answers are good enough! If there’s any that need clarification or further questions, just holler! Thank you again!

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Hejdo.

Last update for the month of April. I’ll be gone for a bit after this due to internet reasons, but I’ll still be continuing with the WIP while I’m gone. It’ll just be a while before the next update, but it’ll be longer and more polished.

All the vital scenes that need to be there for this chapter are already there.

Play here: Memoir of Smoke and Mirrors

Change/Update Log
  • 04/28/20
    •Added an as-of-now-incomprehensible scene of foreshadowing with the subtlety of a brick wall slapping you.
    •Added Flirt scene for Micah/Mirah.
    •Added short character exposition for NPC Strathclyde.
    •Stats Description now available.
    •Changed Personality Stats.

Things To Work On
  • Chapter One
    •Add more options and choices to already existing pool.
    •Make Mischief/Stoicism stat relevant.
    •Polish the narrative.

Ty!

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Oh I can tell I’m just gonna adore your writing then.:joy:

Oh oh is there any chance of having a scene with the narrator flummoxed, so you narrate him teasingly?

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Definitely :joy: In fact, there’s a small bit where you tease him a little. If you haven’t already, choose the bold flirt option for Corbyn/Coryna and then there’s an option to tease the Narrator, hehe

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Yep, I’m officially hyped. XD

Hope you’re able to get some rest while you’re away from the internets!

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Is the creepy old lady based off the Fates?If so,who died when the thread was cut?

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Yup. I don’t think I’m giving away too much by confirming this :joy:

And I genuinely can’t tell right now. Might turn out to be a red herring. Might not be. Creepy old lady’s just doing her job heh

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This game is amazing so far, and I can’t wait to see it continue! I haven’t played it that much since there is little to do as of now, but I know that I will constantly replay it when there is more content ^•^
Also, I noticed that I couldn’t choose a gender for Micah/Mirah, as it automatically set them to male and didn’t let me choose. I don’t know if this is intentional and you just got rid of the female version, or if this is a bug

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She was female for me.

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Thank you! Oml that’s really awesome to hear :pray:

And Micah/Mirah is sexuality-locked as a straight RO, so his/her gender will always be the opposite of the PC. Unless PC is non-binary. Only then will the option for Micah or Mirah appear ^^

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Oooh okay that makes a lot of sense. Thank you for explaining, I was so confused lol ^•^

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Ohhh

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Oh I love unsubtle foreshadowing! It always makes me feel smart.

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Yes, its complete making sense, thanks alot for sharing this.

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As an amateur baker, I approve this WIP. I just made key lime pie, and if I don’t get a chance to make key lime pie in this game i will Riot (I’m kidding, kinda.)

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That lady scares me

I’m extremely jealous; I’ve been desperate to make one and I can’t get my hands on sweetened condensed milk. I may have to suck it up and make a cheesecake version instead, because I do have all the things for that.

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Funny you say that, I just made some key lime cheesecake bars! I still used sweetened condensed milk though. That stuff is a godsend. I’m tempted to post pictures but that feels arrogant and off-topic haha.

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Please post a pic.Pictures are the next best thing to the pie itself.

Alright, if my adoring fans insist…above is the pie before I decorated it! Below is it after I did.

And lastly, my key lime cheesecake bars!

My plans for after this is a key lime marshmallow-based fudge (I have a LOT of key lime juice). And then I’m planning on dark chocolate cupcakes with espresso buttercream and marshmallow filling. When those happen I’ll be sure to post them, if anyone so desires.

Edit: I forgot to post my chocolate chip cookies! These were made before the pie.

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