Wip (discontinued)

[J.R.Salazar]

@Officer_Gallows

I’m a sucker for dark fantasy with some interesting looking RO… I’ll be keeping an eye on this one

Thanks. The ROs are one of the things that I intend on further elaborating and improving.

@Beth_M

Interesting! I get lots of witcher vibes from this one. The premise is very interesting, and I can’t wait to learn more.

Thanks. That’s nice of you!

@Zenobrighter

Hello, liking this so far, but did notice that my huntress was being referred to as he/him from chapter 2 onwards, can’t screenshot as on a mobile, was noticeable when people were talking to or talking about the Huntress. They do say huntress but constantly refer to them as he/him.

Thanks for the feedback. I’ve been wondering why exactly that happened and I think that might’ve happened because I updated Chapter 1 whilst you were playing. I’ve made an alteration to the variables and I’d like to know if that error happens again during your playthrough.

[J.R.Salazar]

04/03/2023 Update:

Chapter 4 is up on dashingdon. It’s 8K words in length. Have fun.

I’ll keep writing and posting updates, but I do plan a rewrite of this story at a certain point in the future.

[Zkrkhey92]

Hello the demo ends here for me ?

[Big_fan1231]

It ends at chapter 3 for me, do i need a new save?

[J.R.Salazar]

@Zkrkhey92

Hello the demo ends here for me ?

@Big_fan1231

It ends at chapter 3 for me, do i need a new save?

No. It was something I just corrected. Check it out now.

[Zenobrighter]

Just reread it twice, my huntress is still being referred to as he, especially in the vampire fight scene, then after the eclipse ambrosia is talking to his men? About the hunter, referring to them as he and a name Dagon is mentioned, my hunter was Maria, dunno if it’s referring to the hunter or not though

[Big_fan1231]

Still ends there. I noticed in the code too after chap 3 ends there is no go to chap_4 command instead straight end scene

[J.R.Salazar]

@Big_fan1231

Still ends there. I noticed in the code too after chap 3 ends there is no go to chap_4 command instead straight end scene

I fixed it.

@Zenobrighter

Just reread it twice, my huntress is still being referred to as he,

I just did a playthrough as a huntress myself and the variables are working fine.

@Zenobrighter

then after the eclipse ambrosia is talking to his men? About the hunter, referring to them as he and a name Dagon is mentioned, my hunter was Maria, dunno if it’s referring to the hunter or not though

Yeah, some of those variables slipped right through. They’re fixed now. You might want to use a spoiler tag.

Thanks for the feedback, people!

[Hector_Lopez]

[Big_fan1231]

Same error

[Zenobrighter]

Sorry, typed quickly so forgot the spoiler tags.

[J.R.Salazar]

'Tis fixed.

[K_zero]

Love the demo and the characters ^^

[J.R.Salazar]

Thanks!