The reason they never grew back, is because they are not coming back, like bruh we got demon blood in us I will think our wings will reject us for that and also the wings were torn off in that paradise jannah was trying to create, so once the paradise disappeared it also vanish along with the wings to never be seen again and lucifer doesn’t need wings they got leg day
But what about like cool demon bat wings like Beelzebub? For a supposedly brilliant demon he just rushed us like a murder hobo and died
I wouldn’t be surprised if that’s his whole plan to escape hell through us and live on like another personality
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From what the game said so far of how lucifer lived which is 3300 years, if i remember right, then in all that time the demon had plenty of time to do a classic jojo sike on us and also the demon didn’t possess us which is the only way demons work, the only thing the demon blood changed in us was, a lack of humanity which is slowly returning depending on how we configure the lucifer character to our taste whether for good or bad
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It is a little strange how nothing happened in like 3600 years, but I bet 5$ that we will get a transformation and gain wings again and potentially wake up Beelzebub.
It can be explained on a meta level though, as us gaining demon wings now would be too much trouble for the storyline and writing, walking around in public and all, but I guess we’ll see what the author planned.
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cheers to that
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hey author quick question what does the x mean on the protagonist back since is on every optional protagonist to choose from and why is precognitive and emotion manipulation so unique @DrDense
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Sounds interesting
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Hello everybody. I am dropping by to let you all know I am still chugging away on chapter 2 and to let you all know the release plan I have decided on.
The first update will be on The 4th of July(if everything keeps going as planned). It will include the Ishtar, Arthur, and Zeus Path.
Then, by the end of July, I will try to upload The Janus and Sun Wukong path. And finally, by mid-August, my goal is to upload the Lucifer and Pele path.
That’s all from me; I hope everybody has a great week!
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Hello. Not for sure if someone mention it. When you play as a male character, and look at the stats to read the description of your character’s appearance, the hair and eyes will say him hair/eyes instead of his hair/eyes. Thats the one thing I had noticed when I go back to my saves of both my Arthur and Lucifer. Its the correct pronoun useage for the descriptions of the appearance of female characters.
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well the game was so gooddd I always enjoy games that are like this keep up the good work!
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Nice premise…The story has been very good so far. Not to put pressure or anything but is there a chance that other mythologies like Indian , Egyptian etc will be included? @DrDense
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It’s already been mentioned that there wouldn’t be any more mythologies added, the Lucifer one was the last one.
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Ah I see…I can understand the logic behind it…Too much branching would just increase work load and the story would be slowed down to account for the branches…
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Well if u are trying to pick a character that is similar to Egypt you can try Ishtar but u will be locked as female and for indian try the monkey king/queen, u will atleast get a little of that indian vibe @WarArtist
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I guess so. I generally choose Arthur or Lucifer cause I like playing as a swordsman.
Also I would’ve killed the Astute Praetor then n there if the option was there. Imagine the reaction of ordinary people .The Elders are on a losing streak against the Praetorium and then all of a sudden some unknown guy gets a triple kill of Praetors. Astute , Dawn n Cloud gone just like that.
I know Dawn is a RO but still it would be crazy if there was an option to do it.
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Found a bug and some typo:
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As the font said, Janus tried to scare Khaizo in this scene but the part was cut off. Also happened with other MC like Ishka, e.t.c.
Should be ‘her eyebrow’ and not ‘he eyebrow’
Wouldn’t, not wouldn’t’t
And also Ugh, not Ug -though I kinda prefer the former. Ug!
Should be ‘from’ not ‘form’
You should also replace the period from ‘drinking a blood bag.’ And the comma from ‘steal it from here,’ to a question mark for more fluidity.
You may also need to replace ‘why are you drinking a blood bag?’ To ‘why are you drinking blood from a blood bag?’ Since drinking a blood bag kinda implies drinking the whole bag when when we really only wanted the blood in it. Unless…
Might add a ‘blood’, ‘vein’ or something between ‘in your’ and ‘runs’ cause it doesn’t make sense as is.
Should be ‘too’ and not ‘to’
This sentence kinda implies that the land is already known as the Modern-day California. You may need to add ‘the land known in the future as’ before ‘modern-day California’.
No, I’m not sitting on you nor will I sit on you in the future Yoru. You simply make for a terrible chair.
Might be better to use “is this really how your years of hiding will end?” Or “so this is how your years of hiding will end,” though this is just me nitpicking.
Better to use ‘like I said’ instead of ‘what I said’. Though it does add a certain… sassy? charm to it.
I’m kind of confused about what the sentence is implying here. Though I do remember reading this quote from a Chinese novel… You may need to clean it up a bit for the readers to understand the implied message.
Should be ‘since’ not ‘sense’
May be prudent to use ‘you simply hide behind the door’ instead of that.
“You are woken up to he sound”
Should be ‘the’, not he.
“And it is hitting you eyes”
Should be your, not you.
Should be ‘are you the’ and not ‘are the’
You you? You!
First sentence should end with a question mark since you’re asking Yoru if she wants to play cards, while the second sentence should end with a period since you are stating a fact.
Should be ‘feeling’ not ‘felling’
Overall, I really, really love this novel! I can’t wait for the second chapter!
Also a tip:
Try using an AI like Grammarly or Quilbot to check for typos. You may also use them to check on your grammar, though I wouldn’t recommend that since it kinda ruins the tone of the story.
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I’m just going to quote the author so we don’t delve into needless conflict
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Yeah I understand, is not for me to decide how your feedback goes but the author
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Just popping by to let you all know that update may be delayed a couple days. My dog I’ve had for 14 years passed away this morning, so I am taking work off and taking a break from writing for a couple of days to collect myself.
Sorry and have a great weekend.
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