600 in a week doesn’t seem bad.
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Hi Kiba! I’ll look through those items this weekend and see if I can get a fix out 
Thank you for bringing it to my attention!
I couldn’t really say. I wrote most of those as they flowed in my mind, and Dena was HUNGRY for the MC at that point. In the original draft Dena basically jumped the MC immediately, and the beta testers told me it was too abrupt, so what you’re seeing is actually a slower burn than intended, lol. I wrote the m/m scenes first before the m/f scenes, so I suppose I could have ported the oral over if I’d been thinking about it, but I find something very hot about how Dena just goes for it. Honestly, I’m a bit surprised how nobody’s raised an eyebrow about when Dena bottoms in the m/m sex scene and asks you to top him in wolf form. I expected that to be a bit controversial 
It was rather self-indulgent of me, but I regret nothing and kinda wish I’d written more! 
Only 600? 
And here I thought that was pretty damn good for the first week! Give me some time 
I’ve also noticed that HG games tend to get HUGE ratings, but some of them are absolutely amazing too. They have a different appeal to me, because they aren’t as constrained by the house style so they can go off the reservation a bit in terms of content, choices, and stats. Like anything in life, it’s a matter of preference.
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Why isn’t this available on kindle yet?
I’ve been wondering that, myself. Seems like Amazon is really dragging their feet last word I heard. I watch for it every day and it still hasn’t showed up.
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Hi love this game got a question tho if you romance Bly is she that committed to the relationship or is she still seeing other people then regarding to the threesome spoiler
choice why is it that jolon is the only candidate if you also romance Tiva why can’t you suggest her? Thanks
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Also, I would like to say that it is a little confusing in some parts on the story when does our MC is in wolf-form and when it is human, like in some parts of the first book.
Like in the flashback when our character returns to the camp, it is pretty hard to tell if it is in human or in wolf-form, at least for me 
You should add somekind of mark that can tell us that tiny detail like a “-” in the beginning of the page
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I think I "broke" the game
If you load a save where you joined Williams, but lost to Haken and ended up in DC, the game will include fragments that mention your escape with Williams as well as those that refer to fighting/killing him.
Also it’s impossible to escape with Tayla, even though you agreed to work with him in book 1.
First of all, congratulations for “breaking” the game 
Second of all, please report the “broken” game to support@choiceofgames.com, they might be able to help you. Unless it’s something the author can resolve.
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It is recommended to direct all bug report through the support email. CoG will then direct this directly to the author. There’s no harm posting it here though since the author is active but sending it through support email will help lighten the load for the author to look through this thread for bug reports since there’s a mix of discussion here as well. 
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I for one have successfully escaped with her
Aaaah I cried when Dena said in the first book that Jolon didn’t make it. I cried A LOT. Blaming myself for not choosing the option to help him during the fight with Williams… but he was alive! I’m sooo glad!
The scene when Dena says "Fuck me like a wolf! " 
Wow!! I was pleasantly surprised~~ that whole scene is 
And when he is nuzzling MC? Super cute!! 
I can’t get him out of my mind! I have tried to romance the others in the first book but always end up with him
Now… I want to know… how long is his hair, and does that changes with the gender? Does he ties up his hair frequently? What does he think about braids? And if he likes braids, will there be an option to braid his hair in the next book?? 
This is from v1.0.2, maybe it's already fixed in the newest version
You follow Dena to his dorm room and talk
for almost an hour, catching each other up
on the events of the last few weeks before
graduating to more entertaining topics. Dena
playfully postulates that your current reality
may be, in truth, a virtual theme park, and
you’re about to explain exactly how
ridiculous that is when his body goes stiff as
a board beside you.
“Dena? Are you okay?” you ask as he
twitches violently.
“I…I can’t…” Dena groans, back arching as
his bones begin to pop and rearrange
themselves within his body and a coat of
coarse fur sprouts in a wave down each
limb. “Something’s wrong!” he gasps through
a muzzle of long, sharp teeth. “I can barely
think! Why can’t I think?” He howls, and you
can feel pain and fear in his voice as he
launches herself out of the bed, claws spread
as he stalks you around the room until your
back is against the wall.
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Is Maker a romance option??? I’ve tried few different paths but can’t get her as romance option.
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No, tough you do have this bizarre scene where she breaks the 4th wall.
Which one is that?
I don’t recall exactly. I think that it’s in the scene after Havok kills Rand
You have to tell her that you’re fascinated by her.
Also, since I haven’t seen anyone mention it, Maker turned herself into some form of vampire.
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O yeah that? That is when you go to her at night and choose to stare at her.
I thought there was something i missed. Yeah she is a vamp, i thought that was obvious? Rivera does say it.
She’s not seeing other people, and if she were, she’d ask you first. She’s pretty open like that.
Honestly? Because I can’t write infinite permutations and the Bly/Jolon/MC threesome was an old request I’d had rattling around in my head for a few years. It almost didn’t make it in as-is. I wish I could include everything, but there’s only so much time I have to write and I didn’t want this to take another year, you know?
I know, I’ve had a few comments on that. Normally it’s a pretty safe assumption that they’re in human form unless otherwise noted, but there are definitely some exceptions. I generally prefer to let the reader imagine the scenes how they want since in most cases the form doesn’t really matter other than in your mind’s eye.
@Saprook Yeesh, that’s something I clearly didn’t anticipate and will be tough to fix. I’ll look into seeing if I can manage to fix that without breaking something else. Variables get really complicated there. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
@Kyumm With Dena (as with a few other characters) I like to do a bit of a ‘Glen Cook’ thing and minimize descriptions so the readers can imagine them how they like them. There are certain characters (Maker, for instance) where their ‘official’ appearance is important so I go into more depth. I’ll tell you that in my head-canon, Male Dena and Female Dena both have long hair. Male Dena ties it up and Female Dena has it down. Of course, that’s just how I picture them, and anyone’s free to imagine them how they want, that’s half the fun of reading!
Also, I’ll have that Dena gender mixup fixed in the new patch I’m working on. Thanks for pointing it out.
I LOVE breaking the 4th wall in interactive fiction. The entire concept behind my first gamebooks (Westward Dystopia) was a 4th wall breaking narrative that deconstructs the nature of the freedom in interactive fiction and how it’s limited by the prescribed choices the reader is given.
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I was glad Bly was prominent in the book, anyway.
Also I am wondering, in the first book is it possible to achieve the Pacifist Achievement when you get the Activist Ending
(I tried to find the corresponding forum to ask the question, but I couldn’t locate it)
Also you should enable somekind of option to delete some save files, cause in some cases, those additional save files are some routes we aren’t even gonna use
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Authors have no control over the file saving feature, that question has
been raised several times over the years to COG but as of now there is
no way to delete the saves.
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