Wellspring : Origin

I have to ask mate: do you really need this many stats? Are you sure you’ll find a use for all of them? On the list of powers, that’s a bit scary to look at- how are you gonna write so many scenarios with more than a dozen possible exclusive power sets?

Oh, and yeah, the section with the other Enhanced, as other people point out, that part is tedious to go through, and heavily discourages people from replaying the game.

Other than those two points, I quite like it. Keep up the good work mate. Looking forward to what comes next.

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A few grammatical errors:

Corporate fat cats would be forced to compensate the masses for all the ears they have taken advantage of people!

I think you meant years.

After all, the world was in a desperate situation, and open war would put humanity in a position from which it would mot recover.

not.

Your’s resonates internally.

Should be yours.

Aside from those, loved the overall concept and the demo. The setting is interesting, amount of abilities to choose from is diverse (which scares me a little, you’re gonna have a hell of a lot of writing to do) and I also love the ability to have more than one power. Shall definitely be looking forward to more!

The energy absorption ability fills this role.

Thanks for trying it out! You’re right, there are a lot of stats, but they are in place to represent a more complex being. That is the essence that I am trying to capture. I want the MC to feel like a real person, so that the weight of the choices will have more meaning.

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Will we be able to get to disaster rating??

Good catch! All fixed. Thanks for letting me know.

Absolutely. Three disaster ranked endings for the MC.

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Yesssssss I want to kick Heinrich’s silver spoon up his ass and take over the federation with my disaster powers!! Mwahahahaha

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What is the strongest power?
And also who is on the picture in the first post??
Aannndd will there be Romance??:smirk::smirk:
(I apologize for all the questions but this game interests me so much!!):+1::grin::+1::grin:
This is my new fav wip. I know people think there is too much stuff about the enhanced but I personally love it!

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I will try to come up with a way to skip some of the material. This will be difficult, as a lot of character defining choices are in that section. I was trying to avoid preset stats, and generic “quick build” questionnaires, but enough people have echoed your opinion for me to see that this may be necessary. Thanks for pointing this out!

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I like the way you think!

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The externally resonating abilities, are the strongest by themselves. The internally resonating abilities will gain more power through combinations, and skill development.

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Very interesting, although playing again I get an error:

opening-cont line 71: Nine-existent variable “him_her”

The power that will get you to disaster class the quickest, is energy absorption. This is the only power that is exclusive to dual resonance. The character on the picture is a possible costume build. Romance? You bet. Keep in mind, that in an effort to make the personality more realistic, the stats will most certainly effect ROs. Rejection is a very real scenario in this game.

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Still getting the same error code, both on my phone and on multiple browsers on my pc. Want me to give a step by step choice selection so we can see what might be going wrong on my end?

Thanks! Forgot to upload my corrected startup file. Should be good now.

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The bad label error? I found the goto that was causing that one, is. it still happening?

Yup, all good.

Got to my speedster, not sure how, ha, but I love speedsters like Flash. :blush:

Keep it up, I really like this - although, perhaps I may offer a suggestion and split longer text up in more paragraphs? Feels less heavy to read, at least to me. :slightly_smiling_face:

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Great suggestion! I will make the change on my next update.

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I love the idea and that is some amazing art!

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