Warborn (WIP) (20k+ Words) (Demo updated: 10/30/25)

Hey everyone, I’ve been working on this project on and off for about two months, so the writing may not be entirely consistent. Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated. I hope you don’t hate it.

Protect your country and its people from the neighboring country of Lestova. Will you save your country from collapse, or be yet another casualty of war?

Warborn is a high fantasy RPG, or as RPG as I could make an IF anyway. In this story, you play as a boy who has just been conscripted into the army of a country on the brink of collapse, and when I say boy, I do mean a child. At the age of 10, you are ripped from the only home you’ve ever known to fight in a war that you never should have seen. As the game progresses, you’ll not only grow your skills but you’ll literally grow as a person, both physically and emotionally. This game tracks both your personality and your character’s age.

So, will you be a charming tactician, comedic rogue, or will you just be a complete asshole? That’s always an option.

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I’ll fix that right away, thank you.

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The problem was that I used a capital B instead of a lowercase. Thanks twine, that’s awesome.

I updated the game so the issue should be fixed.

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I see your points, and don’t worry, the MC will age as the story progresses; there won’t be any romance/ flirting until the MC and others are older.

The MC is only ten in the first part of the prologue; three years have passed since he started training. He is 13, soon to be 14, going to war.

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Right after training, I saw the stats and opened the relatioship page, but got stuck there. There’s no button to go back or anything, just this text:

This is an overview of how all of your companions feel about you.

You have currently not met anyone of note.

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There’s a back arrow in the top left corner.

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Hey ! number @Twenty2 :slight_smile:

Found those.

your lord ?


When the box for the name appear then a " appear next to the name.


stall ?




Can’t buy those shoes. I try to look at the code. And get dizzy.
You need to look where is the problem in those math.

Good first update. Its difficult because its ugly to read but you will change that right ?

Till next.

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I’ll fix that as soon as possible. But you’ll need to tell me exactly what you find ugly about it before I can give you a definitive answer.

Alright it’s all fixed, the quotation marks were there because someone was speaking but I guess I forgot to add the end quotation, so it looks out of place.

As for the boots, it would seem that some items had the wrong amount listed, sooooo my bad.

The game should be updated now.

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Fire the confetti cannons!!! Over 100 people have played the game, and it is now technically rated 4 out of 5. I say technically because only one person has rated it; feel free to leave your own review if you feel so inclined.

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Make some space between save the game and the story.
A clear separation between those elements.

In my opinion im not big fan of the color palette. This blue color give me nightmares (eternal blue error brrr). Maybe add some swap color.

i know its a lot to ask. It could be cool if those elements are add.

Thanks.

Till next.

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I’ll look into fixing the spacing. As for the colors, I’m fairly certain blue is all I can do, but I’ll double-check to be sure.

It would be cool to give players the choice of what color they’d prefer.

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you didn’t react the manual :smiley:

If you are lazy go to the dev discord, the engine you use and if it can be done.

Till next.

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Time for a weekly progress report.

I have updated the game so now the choices will have a mint color to resemble the title of the game.

But I’ve also been writing chapter 1, and speaking of chapter 1 I’m almost done with the character customization. So when I’m finished with that I’ll update the game.

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Time for another weekly progress report.

I got sick last Tuesday and I’m still a little sick now, so I didn’t get as much progress done as I would have liked.

But nevertheless, the update should be done by the end of the week, probably sooner, unless I die or something.

The new update is out. Feel free to give it a try, and please feel free to share your thoughts.

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Great story idea i really like the direction the story is going i wish u and your project the best, take care dude :slight_smile:

Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Happy Halloween.

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Nice game, unrelated but do you play fgo?

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Thank you, I did sort of play it a little; I’m more of a console guy. I’m currently playing Fate Samurai somethingorother, it’s pretty cool.

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I was so ready to say good update when i meet the end of the page when you get attack.

" Then suddenly the bolt hits you. "

That the end of the demo ? Nothing is there that signal anything. Is this a bug ?