it’s pretty intriguing, the characters (+ inspired by one piece) , looking forward to more of this 
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Which is the dragon Ball inspired one? Name?
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Name of it?
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I don’t remember, it’s been abandoned for years.
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Are there more powers coming?
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I didn’t have plans to add more powers. But any ideas is appreciated 
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I`m guessing our character only blacked out at the end due to it being the first time with power
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Yes, but I plan to limit the character usage of the the power. It’s going to start with only 1 time but could increase (if you let the weave transfer their power 
)
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Hey guys, I’ve added some of part 3 to the story. 5k more words. And also I’ve added a new combat system to the game.
Let me know what you guys think about it. Thank you!
Edit: I haven’t check the new chapter cause it’s already 2 am at my country, Soo let me know if there’s any bugs in the new chapter! cheers!
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Now cooking. Im tryna be on on my kaido/rob Lucci ish. Love animal powers 
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You do the Kaido thing, I’ll just blatantly copy Red Hair Shanks
Got to read this a few days ago and I enjoyed what the writer has built for this so far. Looking forward to more of this.
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You mean the thing that was talking to us that the time pirate is trying to permanently kill since his plan failed the first time. Its funny he regarded MC as not important and now he after us. Probably don`t know MC is the pirate king heir
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Hey guys!
Just posted an update!
What’s new:
*17K more words.
*First MAJOR choice.
Liberate Celastara, Let the gangs take control of it, or take control of Celastara yourself. I’ve only added the first part of this choice. So stay tuned for the update!
Please let me know if there any bugs or feedback!
Thanks!
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My first step to becoming the pirate king is happening with Celastara
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That’s a pretty decently sized update
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Im too brain rot the word one piece manage to take all my attention before trying the WIP
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Might be worth going through the script again to correct the missing capitalizations on a bunch of stuff.
Also after replaying the game, overall I like it but some part are kinda repetitive, like the sequence after you leave the island can be summed up as ‘Talk to the crew, something happens, pick your power, talk to the crew, something happens’.
Also I feel like the Speed / Space / Cheat thing is kind of a waste and is kind of a very strong power from the start regardless of your choice. Since this is inspired by One Piece, a choice between a Devil Fruit-like ability, an usual weapon / weapon used in an unusual way and an unorthodox martial art would be a lot better. It would also give you a lot more room to have our character grow stronger and unlock new moves as we go since we’d find new use for the ability or improve ourself as a weapon user or become a better martial artist.
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I’m apprehensive in reading these kinds of IF were they skirt around the edges of the original medium. Sorcerer combat Automica made me fall in love and drop me to the bottom of the earth. Copyright problem strikes for everyone.
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It’s fine as long as you don’t copy everything.
You just have to be creative and change alot of things up but you definitely can’t use the terms that is being used in the stuff that the WIPs are inspired by.
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Thanks for the feedback!
what is sorcerer combat automica?
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