Velocity: The Race Begins (WIP)

The New rising Star entering wip world will it continue burning bright or will it burn out either way I’m going to watch your project @Fusion_Ultimatum with great interest

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Promising so far, honestly a surprise when you opened up with literally being in a womb lol. I did several runs, on the hair style what did it run against? I seems to get lockout of different option on different runs, and Im guessing its not gender.

It will be interesting to see how the racing and the gangs dynamics (+school) dynamics play off each other. Theres isn’t many racing genre, hope for an interesting racing mechanic. Looking forward to updates

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Oh right!

You have two options in the hair color that should be in hair style instead.

Also, when selecting a shirt, it says wrong type in next scene. Crop top selected but not that in next screen.

Glad it is written with women on mind from start instead of after. It is much more fluid storywise.

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No chance! I find it hard to drop things lol. If that makes sense.

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We shall see my friend, we shall see.

This project is much shorter than the other one that I’m doing(Hunter Sky), so I’m less likely to be burnt out on doing Velocity.

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Thank you :blush: for the kinds words. I’m very happy that you found it enjoyable.

The hairstyles are based off your gender and ethnicity. So if you chose African American you’d find you could only pick hairstyles with that hair texture 4a, 4b, 4c, probably the 3s too.

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Hey thanks for stopping by! That kitty in you pfp looks adorable btw.

I’ve always heard people addressing that style as a haircut but it could also be considered a color too.

Yep, I’m trying to learn from the mistakes I made in Hunter Sky.

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Its the end

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Sorry. That’s were chapter one ends.

I think it was dreadlocks and forget the other. Those are definitely styles. Unless young people call it hair color now?

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You are most def correct about the dreads but I was referring to the Chunky highlights style that was popular in the 90s.

It’s basically your hair but it’s dyed in stripes or something like that.

Pretty good game, I enjoy the writing style and the story so far.

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I hereby declare that I take all my supports of all games and put it in here! (I love the game already, please continue the good work on it, and I love the kind of styles you included)

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:blush: Thank you. I greatly appreciate your response and I’m glad that you like it.

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:blush::partying_face::tada: Thanks lots for the support man! I really appreciate it!

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Hey I remember you, you posted a week ago about reception to a racing story. OK emoji

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Loved this, definley destroying Jason.
Amaya seems like a cool character, waiting to see that party.

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I think you should put a message in the original post for beta testers if you are not gonna put all the chapters here.

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Is romance a thing or no

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