Velocity: The Race Begins (SUBMITTED) 290k+ words

wait what other site??

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Most likely patreon

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Thanks for the detailed feedback. I’ll make sure to patch those up.

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I really like your game from what I’ve heard from a friend, I just wanted to ask how many chapters are there for the non patreon demo compared to the patreon demo?

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Cool game vrodie

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The non-patreon version of chapter three is very lack luster. You only get to actually race once and it’s setup to lose no matter what. Kinda wack but overall the game has a good concept👍🏾

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This game is so great it had me reminiscing about Fast and Furious:Tokyo Drift especially that moment where the whole convoy is drifting my imagination instantly spiked and I imagined my MC in that moment but anyways this game is extremely amazing your doing a great job @Fusion_Ultimatum

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Are new chapters available only on Patreon?

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For now. Yep :+1:.

Hey there! I’m glad you like it. Thanks for the feedback!

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You said that the type of relationship we have with the RO’s depends on the MC. But in your opinion how would you describe each RO’s relationship with the MC when they date for example would being with Jason be like a toxic relationship Maddy Perez+Nate Jacobs type of relationship or maybe do we get a Brian+Mia type of relationship with another MC. Also do the other characters know that our MC dad is/probably was a like famous NASCAR driver if they didn’t how would they react when they find out? Also do they know of our MC’s brother since judging from what I’ve read so far he was involved in the illegal street racing game?

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I don’t know how far you’ve progressed in the story but once you get there you’ll definitely get a taste of how your RO’s treat you. Especially Brit.

Some of the characters wouldn’t know about the MC’s father, unless they talk about it. But everyone knows about the MC’s brother. He’s like Dom Toretto of the Velocity verse lol.

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You said you took inspiration from Fast and Furious. Was it the first one’s e.g Fast and Furious 2001, 2 Fast too Furious and Tokyo Drift or the more recent ones. What was your favourite part of writing.

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Do be honest. I took inspiration from the first three and Initial D, also Need For Speed was one too.

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Who would you say fits each character comparison like you said the MC brother is basically Dominic Toretto, what about the other characters? And canonically who would be MC comparison?

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Hmm. You want to know who I’d compared the Velocity characters to?

For the MC that depends on your choices. But originally I tried to model the MC after myself/past. But as I went on writing I thought he/she needed a more cooler story.

Amaya was made with a comparison to someone I knew in real life.

Lakeem was inspired by Roman and Tej.

Matthias was inspired by Jessie and someone else I went to school with.

Jason was inspired by DK and Brian

Shawn was inspired by Brian and Dom

Angela was inspired by Angela from BMW

Brittney was inspired by someone I knew in real life.

D Yung was inspired by late rapper Eazy E.

Jun was inspired by Huang from GTA CT

The rest were made with a purpose to support the plot.

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More update? I thought you said the game was submited

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Sorry. The game hasn’t been submitted yet but it’s very close. Only two chapters remain to be completed and then I can submit it. I’m running a beta to test and experiment with different ideas on my Patreon. You can join me there if you wanna see how far the games progresses.

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Okay! So I’ve finally added some mechanics where you can use different vehicles and customize them. It’s not perfect yet but I’m still trying to test out some ideas for the final game. Also, romance after much persuasion, romance is now a part of the game. You can romance up to five/six people and even achieve a super spicy scene with them. I cringed a lot writing them but they’re finally done :sweat_smile:. I hope you guys like them.

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Is anyone else having trouble getting to chapter 4? or is it only me having trouble getting to chapter 4?

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