Velocity: The Race Begins (SUBMITTED) 290k+ words


Second choice error

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for some reason i have 331% of relationship with amaya

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Really good story I love it though the one issue I have is that after a while you can’t put money towards the debt or interact with Lakeem nor purchase weapons without the game bugging. (My screenshot unfortunately wouldn’t post)

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same

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I love this story. It’s one of the best IF here.

One of the things I crying about is the errors, but that’s why it’s in the working progress😩

Errors:



These are just some I caught. I did catch others but forgot to screenshot.

• The kissing of Amaya, all options give you an error.
• Can’t raise Matthias relationship, even if you spend time with him.
• When inviting Lakeem to be part of your crew, you get an error.

Like I said, some I forgot about but there were a couple. But this is still one of the best IF I’ve ever read​:fire::fire::fire:

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Try again pls. I think I caught the error but I wanna know if it’s working on your side.

Fixed! Thanks for letting me know.

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I have to try and sort that out indeed. Sorry about that.

Thanks mate. I’m super glad you like it! Oh the error is fixed btw.

Wow! I’m very glad you enjoyed it mate! I’m always happy to get feedback. I’ll get to fixing the error and let you know.

  1. Chapter 7 isn’t working for me.
  2. How to get nos?
  3. How to get weapon without game crashing?

Great update BTW!

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All of it is working but I still can’t buy the gun.

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Yeah ans I also can’t seem to improve my relationship with Mattias to get him to put nos in my car.

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Try again I think it just worked for me

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Try again. It’s working now👍

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1 That’s the end for now, sorry.
2 You have to increase your relationship with one of the characters and ask them.
3 I just fixed that error so it should be working now.

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I chose the Crenshaw Choppaz gang and when we won our first race, Kurk spoke to us and both he and we acted as if we didn’t know each other.

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Still bummed out about this forced female attraction and (implicit) straightness of the male mc. Yes there isn’t real romance in this game. And yes we can avoid it by not choosing dialogue options that make mc act out on it but that would still just make the mc a repressed straight boy, not even ace, let alone gay.
Please let male mc at least flirt with some cute guys (that preferably aren’t Brock, Jason is more of a toss up my mc would flirt with him but only if it got under his skin, so to speak, not because my mc would want more than a possible one night stand with the kid).

In the new sections I noticed that it is possible to do some things that I think are supposed to be unique twice, like getting involved in mom’s dating life and searching big bro’s apartment multiple times. Lastly is there no way to increase mc’s control skill in the work on yourself bit(s). Would also be neat if athletics and combat (boxing) skills affected stamina points even just a little bit and a bit bummed that even with reasonable athletics and boxing skills mc doesn’t seem to be filling out nicely physique wise like how Shawn did, if the npc’s are to be believed.

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Did he take money from you? If he did then he knows you.

There are three different scenes with the mother that you have the option to enter. As for the kissing scene you aren’t forced and that is not your MC’s fault for being approached. In real life you can’t control who likes you or who may approach/flirt with you despite your preferences, so borrowing that, Amaya was the one that made advances on the MC, not the other way around. The other choices are purely platonic, at least to me. And I try to have different choices for different people with different preferences and different personalities, so that’s why there’s a choice to blatantly dismiss Amaya’s kiss or flirtatious behavior, but others have the option to engage if they so please. I also don’t think you have to like someone to tell them they look good, but hey🤷.

Other than that being able to enter the apartment more than once is an error. Thanks for letting me know.

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