UPDATE POLL POST 500 (06/03) the wars we wage (Now with 180k words)! isekai fantasy game

I don’t think so, it’s quite a difficult dynamic to write and the plot is pretty heavy as it is. But who knows !

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The military college part of the story could use more action and excitement added to it. So far there’s been a bunch of info thrown at us with very little happening. Caught myself zoning out a few times.

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Humm I see ! I just didn’t want to stay tooooo long on it because it’s not really the main plot. But I could definitely include a few more passages : D

Thanks for the suggestion !

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Also could we make alucard references if we choose the duel pistols

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That’ll be a nice touch I can try incorporating, espcially since I added the dual pistol in reference to him

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Also have you ever seen hellsing abridge, because if you have, Alucard in that show has some lines in it that’s really funny you can use for refrenses the MC could make

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I like this story I hope there is more child POV in orphanage/early military academy phase because I feel its really important shaping the MC, also wondering if there will be Poly route somethere down the line.

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I think I’ll put some more of this lore out because everyone seems to want it lool. I didn’t expect it, but it’ll be a nice addition to the story. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I don’t think so, my mind might change on this in the future but for now it’s a no because I find 1 on 1 romance really hard as it is, I don’t think it’s in my chords to do a poly route rn

Thanks for the support !

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Yes, I always like child POV, you know curious, exploring, everything is a wonder, the thing we all lose when grow up.

Ahh not a problem with RO it’s just a suggestion, keep up the good work.

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Me months later without putting out any new content, when all hopes seemed gone

So here it isssss, the new update with 46k of new content ! Last Wednesday was my birthday, and I was like, I wanna update for my birthday, like the self centered individual that I am, but I got a bit sidetracked once more lol.

But here we finally are, in this update you get :
-a new death path ! (I really like this one, I’m eager to hear what are you thoughts about it)
-a new chill day path, with Adama, your mentor ! (quite a different path because it gives a bit of geopolitical context)
-a new holiday activity (this one is ex aequo with the new death path in term of my appreciation, you’ll finally get to act a bit mean)
-and the direct follow up of the activity

I’m really grateful for all of you who kept playing and giving comments on the game, it means a lot to me, I’ll try to update a bit more regularly but I won’t promise anything because last time I did and I couldn’t own up to it (which I hate).

Btw I’m always curious to know if a line/dialogue was found particularly interesting or well put, so don’t hesitate to quote some stuff if you want ! ;D

So hope you’ll get a good play,

and until next update if,

Deus lo Vult !

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Update!!!
Also happy Belated Bday :birthday: :partying_face:

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: thanks for the hype ! I hope the play will be up to standards !

Thanks a lot !!! My jjk merch went up this time so I’m really happy :face_with_hand_over_mouth:

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Lol i shall look forward to giving the update a read when i can hopefully soon. :smiley: more importantly though congrats on the birthday

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Looking forward to your review ! And thanks for the wishes !!!

God this so good, I wish the update was a bit bigger so I can continue reading your fantastic writing and story

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I really liked the story

I remember I had an option to buy streetwear clothes but it disappeared

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I got an error after Adama first question…in his place

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I messed up the scene with T and started talking about ties and shirts, but it should have been cargos and beanies, I’ll change it tomorrow when I wake up !
Thanks for the comment !

thanks !

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that’s so weird, when I played it on Choicescript IDE and ran a few tests, it worked, I’ll need to get a playthrough on the plateform tomorrow, thanks for signalling this !

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@mah_sanogo Picked up 2 bugs so far that stops the game from working.

"Don't buy fashion crimes, I think you might do so." The surprising tease of ${Timothy} was the last you registered from the banter thrown your way.
*finish
*goto_scene shopping

you put a *finish there so the game stops; we can’t go shopping.

#You quickly heal her cheek and pour some of your mana into her, protecting her from the effects of the candies she might have eaten.

She reached for her cheek and her eyes twinkled in awe, speechless.
You left quickly afterward, the small smile you had on your face vanishing as you gathered your thoughts about the situation.
  
The war is picking back up, and with biological warfare in tow, we're in trouble.
  *goto_scene housefood.

There’s a full stop/punctuation mark (.) after *goto_scene housefood. which breaks the game.

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